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hopper_mantis1yrReplied to Uncultured_swineCh 396 Counterattacking at Its Best- hopper_mantis1yrReplied to KingConnerCh 395 Tense Moments
- hopper_mantis1yrReplied to KingConnerCh 395 Tense Moments
- hopper_mantis1yrReplied to KingConnerCh 395 Tense Moments
- hopper_mantis1yrReplied to TrackShadow
he is Mc in this novel. so he will succeed no matter where he goes, at least personally. he can either join a winning team and keep winning or go to a declining one and go for trophies. later one sounds better. joining any already high performing team like tottenham which is already quite good will break the balance and man u will become obsolete from the epl race. but joining man u will make it a tough competition between man u, liverpool, arsenal, city and spurs. joining man u will make it possible for a direct comparison between z7 and cr7. his stage will be upgraded immediately.
Ch 362 Interested Clubs - hopper_mantis1yrReplied to TrackShadowCh 362 Interested Clubs
- hopper_mantis1yrReplied to NoloroCh 362 Interested Clubs
- hopper_mantis2yrCommentedCh 24 Aura & Elesa
- hopper_mantis2yrReplied to hopper_mantis
.Good job. But I would prefer a late romance. He has just started his journey.Friend and love is important and good. But it isn't everything. At least let him reach the league first. There are lot other fanfic with love harem and so on, it contains everything but POKEMON, but you have done a marvelous job with showing Pokemon capture, training them, everything good. But some say it becomes monotonous with only Pokemon and stuff, well the story is about Pokemon literally and mc could get into competitions which requires only human participation like combat, cooking, singing and what not. Maybe he will help police by having recruited as a special officer for some time, get their exclusive Pokemon like growlithe etc. Also instead of just following routes to reach gyms and only catching Pokemon that are on the way, maybe he could just specifically go somewhere to catch a specific Pokemon ,which maybe rare or common. I was really impressed with him catching bellsprout. All in one, there are many options for you to make this a polished gem. Let it be unique. Most fanfic tend to go too dark, harem shit, catching way too Pokemon and not training them, the list goes on. Just read other stories on any platform, you will get the idea. Let Pokemon be the core of the pokemon story, isn't that why we are call here? Well I had nothing to do after exam so I wrote this.
Ch 23 restaurant and surpises - hopper_mantis2yrCommentedCh 190 Against Vålerengen Fotball
- hopper_mantis2yrReplied to Tha_Vault
I think the author is putting all the matches and all about his days because it is the starting of his career and as it is needed to show his growth and how he would become the ace of his team. I guess after he achieves the status, it will fast forward giving the main details only .
Ch 190 Against Vålerengen Fotball - hopper_mantis2yrReplied to mrbigddCh 177 Frustration
- hopper_mantis2yrCommented
I was getting tired of Angy. Angy this....Angy that. Telling secrets,teaching techniques, Why?It felt a little forced.waiting for miss Aimee. Love the teacher,directly telling his mother that she would look after this exceptional boy which she( his mother )failed. Love the story and plot more and more.
Ch 165 Throwback - hopper_mantis2yrCommentedCh 133 A Day-off I
- hopper_mantis2yrCommentedCh 121 The Match Ends
- hopper_mantis2yrCommentedCh 118 Debut Game III
- hopper_mantis3yrCommentedCh 104 First Official Training as a Pro IV