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They usually look like this though.
Leysritt is on the left and Sella is in the middle.
For those who don’t understand, she is called Veronica in 1st POV because that’s all Victor knows her as. However, since its now in 3rd POV she is called Krul because we, the reader, know her real name is Krul.
Got really into your stories recently so here’s another review lol. Writing quality: 5/5 There’s little to no grammar mistakes and they’re not really noticeable. The characters personalities are gone into depth as well and the interactions are interesting to read. Updating Stability: 5/5 In all honestly I don’t really know lol. Haven’t been reading this fic until just recently but it seems pretty good. Story development: 5/5 Honestly a breath of fresh air in comparison to the other mha fics. Author’s not afraid to take the story in a completely different direction form the original which is great. Character Design: 5/5 The characters are portrayed like they should be and the mc’s personality is fun to read. World background: 5/5 Pretty good so far though it has a few inconsistencies but they can be easily ignored. So stop reading this review and just read the fic already.
Didn’t get to give this novel a review before it was moved so here we go. Characters: 5/5 The interactions between the mc and his sister are oddly satisfying to read and feel like actual people. The side characters are also given a very good amount of detail. Overall the characters are written out really well. Story: 5/5 From what I’ve read so far in these couple of chapters the story isn’t some half-baked plot to move the story forward but actually a rather interesting read. Updating Stability: 5/5 The updates are every few days so your not left hanging for a long time waiting for the next. The chapters are also pretty long leaving you satisfied till the next one comes out. Which is honestly kinda refreshing on this site where there are authors that take a month to upload a short chapter. Writing quality: 5/5 There is literally no grammar mistakes that I found throughout my read and like I said previously chapters are pretty long and fleshed out. So anyways this is my review(It’s also my first review ever so be honored XD).