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DaoistWrC6ED1yrPostedI ABSOLUTELY FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY. IF YOU DONT SHUT THE FUCK UP. THANK YOU!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.
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Pouldrons = Shoulders Placard = Lower Torso/Stomach Vambrace = Forearm/Lower Arm Gauntlet = Hand/Glove Cuisses = Thigh/Upper Leg Sabatons = Boots/Feet
Before him.. Was a black and red Demonic looking armor that had multiple blistering red veins on the pouldrons, placard, vambrace, gauntlets, cuisses and sabatons.Β - DaoistWrC6ED1yrReplied to Killix_KreedCh 87 Auction Begins
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more*?
"Shit! Help me, I need no information shit". - DaoistWrC6ED1yrCommented
pituitary gland = a small pea-sized gland that plays a major role in regulating vital body functions and general wellbeing.
The owner felt like his brain was heavy, it felt dull like pounded yam and mashed tofu. It was a freakish comparison, but it was apt for his situation. He felt as if his pituitary gland was put on the burning fire. - DaoistWrC6ED1yrCommented
you dont need quotation marks after every sentence
Lila stared at her kid and said, "Young Man, I've noticed your face has altered dramatically." Avoid becoming connected with those prohibited individuals. I don't give a damn if Vincent fails. I just want him to be alive and well. It's preferable to be human than to be a test subject." - DaoistWrC6ED2yrCommented
most likely or take out the most and have it just be probably
About three-fourths of his 500 slot inventory was completely filled, leaving Liam most probably the richest player in all of the game. - DaoistWrC6ED2yrCommented
Is agitated the right word for here? Why is he troubled or anxious over the mounds of gold? Do you mean to say hes excited?
Even though he had faced enough in his life, giving him a calm and steady mentality, he still couldn't help but be agitated a bit at the sight of the three or four remaining mounds inside the cave, all sparkling brightly. - DaoistWrC6ED2yrCommented
livid mean extremely angry. how can the MC be extremely angry with happiness? the word livid doesnt fit here.
There were even several of them and Liam hurriedly pocketed everything, including the gold coins. He raised his head again, his face was now almost livid with happiness and excitement that he was grinning from ear to ear. - DaoistWrC6ED2yrCommented
was a huge staircase *
Griffyth was massive. There were a huge staircase that lead up to the entrance of the school. The school had columns going up at the front of the building. The modern white walls and lots of windows were done in recent years, but Lee Seng never really was in awe. It was just a place he went to because he had to. - DaoistWrC6ED2yrCommented
Vitriol = cruel and bitter criticism
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Palisade Wall - A palisade, sometimes called a stakewall or a paling, is typically a fence or defensive wall made from iron or wooden stakes, or tree trunks, and used as a defensive structure or enclosure.
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, even he could feel the aura coming off these people, off instead of of
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cadaverous = resembling a corpse in being very pale, thin, or bony.
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