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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091d
    Commented

    I guess, Heimer will betrayed the hero because of his jealousy but I want to point out that the autor could have used more subtile approach to create a surprise if Heimer betrayed the hero. I like the book but if you want to improve the writing, you should try to let the reader discover things and not explain the things to the writer.

    Even more so for Heimer who was also at the eighth level. The small seed of jealousy that had opened earlier blossomed strongly at this moment. He always saw Kayden as a genius, but a genius inferior to him, and at this moment things were proving otherwise.
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    the monarch
    Fantasy · Zetronys
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00092d
    Replied to Maloztska24

    They dind’t understand your commentary😂

    "Hey old man, who's that?" What is your name? "asked Ryan to the old man, no one knew the name of the old man, since they remembered, he was known as an old man.
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    the monarch
    Fantasy · Zetronys
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00097d
    Commented

    I would like Nephis to be scared but knowing how strong she is (self healing, super explosion, multiple echo from the clan, sword genius, adding Cassie prediction and observation, and fire cohort) even Sunny with all his power would not be sure to win against her!

    She was not afraid of the Lord of Shadows, his onyx devil, and other secrets the mysterious Saint could have been hiding. However, should the negotiations go badly… fighting a powerful enemy within the walls of their Citadel was bound to be troublesome. 
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00098d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 489 Chapter 489 – The Desolate Continent
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Carle0009
    Carle000912d
    Commented

    Anatomy betrayed all their employees

    She hated traitors more than anything!
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Carle0009
    Carle000917d
    Commented

    I like the new turn of the story!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

    Ch 1592 Humble Shopkeeper
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle000921d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 476 Chapter 476 – Sincerity
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Carle0009
    Carle000924d
    Commented

    The thing that is annoying, is that if the futur Sunny said to don’t enter, it’s mean, he is not gonna earn benefit?

    Ch 1579 Forgotten
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle000930d
    Commented

    The things is even if he lied and Legion fall for it. He didn’t really have the choice. He needed help and even if the Mad elfe won a lot out of this deal. Legion still earn something that was important for him. Legion 7 didn’t agree because he didn’t need. Legion like with Salvini, will always try to not make deal when he is not confident!

    He has succeeded twice to great effect with Legion so he expected the third round of deals to go smoothly. However, Legion-7 didn't fall for it. The spiritual abomination refused to give him its memories. 
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    GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
    Fantasy · DMadLord
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Replied to IceNSnow

    But I agree, it’s cool that other characters as an impact on the story. It’s just, I really don’t like Cassie. But the author is really great, to make me dislike a fictional character who is not even really evil. I mean she did all the choice naturally. It was normal that Nephis who help her when she was in need the most compare to Sunny who just help her at first because of Nephis, was helped by her. It’s just that Sunny was never paying enough attention to her, even if it was hard to predict that she had this much influence. It was alway clear that she hid a lot and a lot of things!

    Ch 1558 First Thread
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Replied to IceNSnow

    If we look at the story Sunny doesn’t have a big impact. He didn’t change the end of Antarctica, he didn’t prevent or stop the war between clan. In this nightmare he didn’t killed any defilement. Nephew has a way bigger impact for the moment.

    Ch 1558 First Thread
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Replied to Carle0009

    It would be normal if she manipulate everything during a nightmare but that she influence everything from the last nightmare is not logical.

    Ch 1558 First Thread
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    It doesn’t make sense that she could predict the pyramid, a space separate from the time and space of the world to protect the secret from god. It would mean she can predict thing that even gods will have difficulty. I like the cliffhanger but Cassie is way to op and I don’t like her.

    Ch 1558 First Thread
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    It doesn’t make sense that her power is that powerful. It would mean predicting movement of monster way stronger than her…

    "...It was back on the Chained Isles. When I came to you, intending to recruit you to challenge the Second Nightmare together. And you told me that you received a vision of us dying in the winter. You have already been planning for today, all the way back then."
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    For once I agree with Cassie. But just this time!

    "But what is the worth of saying sorry? It wouldn't have changed anything. Words are worthless. If someone is truly sorry, they should express it through their actions, don't you think?"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    That’s my boy! Should never trust Cassie, she keeps her cards close and is not honest at all. She is worst than an ennemy like mirror prince because she can back stab you.

    Sunny would be lying if he said that he had let go of that grudge completely. 
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    He is saying that he doesn’t want to invade the privacy of Cassi and trust her but Cassi is keeping a lot of secret and apart from Modret she is the one who is the less truthful!

    Ch 1530 Blessing of Misfortune
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00091mth
    Commented

    I think, he should be in the ancient battlefield? Kind of sad, he didn’t kill the goddess but he would have his revenge later. Could let athreius (the demon) eat her plane.

    A/N: And so the timeline has been restored. I don't think I need to ask but I should. Where is Legion-7 now?
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    GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
    Fantasy · DMadLord
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00093mth
    Commented

    So she find jack’s sparrow compass!😂

    "So, this divine relic… is basically a pretty flashlight with a very basic navigation function?"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Carle0009
    Carle00093mth
    Commented

    Revenge from the brother?

    Ch 266 Chapter 266 – Specter Cage
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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