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I guess, Heimer will betrayed the hero because of his jealousy but I want to point out that the autor could have used more subtile approach to create a surprise if Heimer betrayed the hero. I like the book but if you want to improve the writing, you should try to let the reader discover things and not explain the things to the writer.
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I would like Nephis to be scared but knowing how strong she is (self healing, super explosion, multiple echo from the clan, sword genius, adding Cassie prediction and observation, and fire cohort) even Sunny with all his power would not be sure to win against her!
Anatomy betrayed all their employees
The things is even if he lied and Legion fall for it. He didn’t really have the choice. He needed help and even if the Mad elfe won a lot out of this deal. Legion still earn something that was important for him. Legion 7 didn’t agree because he didn’t need. Legion like with Salvini, will always try to not make deal when he is not confident!
But I agree, it’s cool that other characters as an impact on the story. It’s just, I really don’t like Cassie. But the author is really great, to make me dislike a fictional character who is not even really evil. I mean she did all the choice naturally. It was normal that Nephis who help her when she was in need the most compare to Sunny who just help her at first because of Nephis, was helped by her. It’s just that Sunny was never paying enough attention to her, even if it was hard to predict that she had this much influence. It was alway clear that she hid a lot and a lot of things!
It doesn’t make sense that she could predict the pyramid, a space separate from the time and space of the world to protect the secret from god. It would mean she can predict thing that even gods will have difficulty. I like the cliffhanger but Cassie is way to op and I don’t like her.
It doesn’t make sense that her power is that powerful. It would mean predicting movement of monster way stronger than her…
For once I agree with Cassie. But just this time!
That’s my boy! Should never trust Cassie, she keeps her cards close and is not honest at all. She is worst than an ennemy like mirror prince because she can back stab you.
I think, he should be in the ancient battlefield? Kind of sad, he didn’t kill the goddess but he would have his revenge later. Could let athreius (the demon) eat her plane.
So she find jack’s sparrow compass!😂