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The trio, along with Guillaume of the Berrys and Ava's cousin Azéma Lizier, were inseparable teenagers who often spent their days together.- Carle00093dReplied to ReadOrange7
Je was a secret war against Pierre
The trio, along with Guillaume of the Berrys and Ava's cousin Azéma Lizier, were inseparable teenagers who often spent their days together. - Carle00096dCommented
I think the author watch the French movie: RRRrrrr!
Many families had fathers and children with the same names, making it impossible to tell them apart without adding "père," "aîné," or "junior" to their names. - Carle00098dCommented
How can she send a note when even administration paper and every information of Sunny were delete?
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It’s funny how 50% of the name finished with an « A »
*Author Note; I am gonna introduce the fl soon~ Does anyone wanna suggest a name? - Carle000913dCommented
Yeah. Knowledge is power so read the dam Book!😂
'Knowledge is power. I should try harder to know more about my classmates,' Hade resolved in his mind. - Carle000913dCommented
He should read it. Knowledge is power
As for Professor Tanaka, Hade was trying to avoid a situation where the man tried to coerce him into reading his Magic Genetics book again. - Carle000914dReplied to Matt_T_8670
But she knew, she had had a brother just not that Sunny was her brother
"I'm pretty sure I would remember having an older brother." - Carle000914dReplied to Corey_Fulmore
I mean even if he trigger the war. It was obvious this war would have happen at one point in a time. I’m not suprised other god used this opportunity even if they could know that someone was also profiting of the situation. At the end Leonel doesn’t matter enough to be taken into account.
"But, you have still overplayed your hand. I wonder what the world would think once they realize you're the one who triggered a war of Gods and Demi-Gods?" - Carle000916dCommented
I guess, Heimer will betrayed the hero because of his jealousy but I want to point out that the autor could have used more subtile approach to create a surprise if Heimer betrayed the hero. I like the book but if you want to improve the writing, you should try to let the reader discover things and not explain the things to the writer.
Even more so for Heimer who was also at the eighth level. The small seed of jealousy that had opened earlier blossomed strongly at this moment. He always saw Kayden as a genius, but a genius inferior to him, and at this moment things were proving otherwise. - Carle000917dReplied to Maloztska24
They dind’t understand your commentary😂
"Hey old man, who's that?" What is your name? "asked Ryan to the old man, no one knew the name of the old man, since they remembered, he was known as an old man. - Carle000922dCommented
I would like Nephis to be scared but knowing how strong she is (self healing, super explosion, multiple echo from the clan, sword genius, adding Cassie prediction and observation, and fire cohort) even Sunny with all his power would not be sure to win against her!
She was not afraid of the Lord of Shadows, his onyx devil, and other secrets the mysterious Saint could have been hiding. However, should the negotiations go badly… fighting a powerful enemy within the walls of their Citadel was bound to be troublesome. - Carle000923dCommentedCh 489 Chapter 489 – The Desolate Continent
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Anatomy betrayed all their employees
She hated traitors more than anything! - Carle00091mthCommentedCh 1592 Humble Shopkeeper
- Carle00091mthCommentedCh 476 Chapter 476 – Sincerity
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The things is even if he lied and Legion fall for it. He didn’t really have the choice. He needed help and even if the Mad elfe won a lot out of this deal. Legion still earn something that was important for him. Legion 7 didn’t agree because he didn’t need. Legion like with Salvini, will always try to not make deal when he is not confident!
He has succeeded twice to great effect with Legion so he expected the third round of deals to go smoothly. However, Legion-7 didn't fall for it. The spiritual abomination refused to give him its memories. - Carle00091mthReplied to IceNSnow
But I agree, it’s cool that other characters as an impact on the story. It’s just, I really don’t like Cassie. But the author is really great, to make me dislike a fictional character who is not even really evil. I mean she did all the choice naturally. It was normal that Nephis who help her when she was in need the most compare to Sunny who just help her at first because of Nephis, was helped by her. It’s just that Sunny was never paying enough attention to her, even if it was hard to predict that she had this much influence. It was alway clear that she hid a lot and a lot of things!
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