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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    You should add what he is an archangel of like archangel of life, death, deetruction or creation. You should give him a ruler class aswell so he knows how to rule maybe even an emporer class. these are ideas u could use.Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
    OVERLORD: GOD OF THE NEW WORLD
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Try to convince ainz to log out so thaT he doesnt become a threat. Text ainz an excuse like u near him in real life and u wanted to meat but just make him not isekai. He could buy all the world items with real money and players will give it to him cuz they dont need it anymore. Also make rubedo and the guradians loyal to him like how ainz makes albedo love him. So that they dont betray him unless he does something betrays them.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    OVERLORD: GOD OF THE NEW WORLD
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Author this ch is EPIC!!! Pls live up to the hype u created with this ch and drop another EPIC chapter. If it makes it easier for u you can write the the chapters from the Mc perspective so u dont have to right all the fights going on. Like u could say from Mc’s perspective he saw xebec fighting escanor on equal ground till xebec adjust to his new power making him stronger and escanor getting weaker cuz it is passing noon. While redfield WB and roger fight cuz it was stated that they were supposed to Be meaning they had to have faught brefore. These are my ideas hopefully they help u make more EPIC chapters. Thnx author for this ch

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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Why does he want to save skjor so much that he hurts himself. Cuz deny the world means he has to leave earlier

    Ch 53 C53 Dovahdrool
    Hell's Eternal (Dropped)
    Anime & Comics · FlammableFire
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Author dont let damien encounter a defeat by the marines in godvalley cuz he had been preparing for it since he joined xebec so he should have sevrel escape routes or have his assisn girl get him out with her fruit or ge can fly out but just maybe he can walk out like a boss

    Ch 2 [98] The Beginning of the End
    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    HE is short cuz the curse stopped his ageing not cuz of training. This is demon body not human. I mean demons have seven hearts well high ranked one do

    After making it through the final lap I collapse due to exhaustion as I could hear Chandler cry manly tears as he was proud of my accomplishment as I felt him cancel his magic which lifted off the gravity as he picks me up over his shoulder as we headed off home.
    Reborn as Meliodas
    Anime & Comics · Dragonlord04
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    I thought him becoming a better werewolf Also meant getting rid of the weakness of silver or maybe even making it just sting him not melt his skin off

    Ch 51 C51 First Blood
    Hell's Eternal (Dropped)
    Anime & Comics · FlammableFire
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Mc could ignore him and when one of the teachers comes to ask a question he can say that he trusted his inctinct which told him Riot wasnt in danger and that he could use this to learn not to go after villians out of hes league like how the zero point was out of riot league so he didnt interfere

    As I contemplated, what to do. The zero pointer, was fast approaching, and I wondered if they'd really let him get crushed to death?
    Altered Mind (MHA)
    Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Hopefully mc smart enough to realize this is just a test and that he is being to see if he chooses to save him or ignore him.

    Ch 14 Entrance Exam
    Altered Mind (MHA)
    Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Author pls highlight Mc divine vitality and endurance also what it means to have a grandmastery in Observation pls. Ms Peak armament and fruit should leave a scar or the admiral if he doesnt kill him. I mostly want u to emphasize the Observation though. Thx

    Ch 1 [94] Storming the Base (3)
    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Kill him

    Ch 46 Reader Voting: Issei, yes, no?
    Gods Multiverse Entertainment
    Anime & Comics · Sebastian_HEsse
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 299 Back to Earth (I)...
    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Make them land in elisium

    Ch 299 Back to Earth (I)...
    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Tell her she is hurting u duh and then go

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    From Player To Npc
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Author can u make a chapterof how the meta humans see reo and his lovers. Also like some teansgers talking bout his mansion. Thnx

    Ch 298 Chapter 303
    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Hopefully Mc leave his clone to guard tsunade

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
    Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Yasashiki
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    SuccessfulLy Aquired A lydia A Lydia: Is a womeN who is sworn to carry your burdens.

    Ch 66 Chapter 66: True Colors
    IHAPR V.0
    Video Games · God_Of_Brutality
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    Hopefully nobe of that conceding goals the 2nd half cuz they just came back from weeks of rest none of them are fatigued and no roomie mistakes plz this is professional football that rarley happens and why dont you ever include the other team making mistakes cuz so far the mistakes have been one sided. And Zachs x-factor should be shining this game with team in tiptop shape and not just him scroing last minuMte goals. Hopefully they dominate through out the game. To emphasize Zach going at his top speed longer. Use my opinion however u see fit author. And thanks for the chapter

    Ch 220 Back to Trondheim
    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
    Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    He should be able to destroy what is holding the soul stone or just summon it to himself when he gets to vormir or just use the space stone to summon them all to himself. Cuz no one takes the space stone seriously in fanfics. Its a infinity stone with infinte power in its respictive universe. So he should be able to summon the with the space stone. Or use the time stone to get the doul stone from the future when someone makes the sacrifice. Or a better one go to TVA and get the stone they keep as paperweight. He just has to absorb the stones

    Ch 296 Reactions (IV)
    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Abdi_Ali_2366
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    This Dude is leading her fantasies continuously while he has a wife a child on the way and 10years older than her. This is just disgusting

    "You can come inside and relax as well when you finished, you should enjoy the trip before it's too late." I added since I didn't want her to be a workaholic like Chizu
    Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Yasashiki
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