Despite not being my type of story, I enjoyed the writing and how the first chapter unfolded. I believe it will be a good story for those who like the type.
I found it quite interesting, I usually read a lot of thriller books but here at Webnovel there aren't many that are really interesting. I haven't read all the chapters yet, but I will soon :D
The Unknown World:For the sake of my sister's soul.
I come here in this comment to let you know that I will take a break and be back in 2-3 weeks. I've been having problems with creativity and also laziness, I'm going to use this time to write and idealize the next arcs. I hope you understand.
Thanks brother, from the beginning my intention was to progress story, narrative and writing with time, it's my first adventure with a story that isn't horror so I'm a little lost, but with time I will improve! thanks for the support.