Review chapter 24: " ..... the auto-though book which she found it ..."

Review chapter 23: "She was was put into more dilemma..."

Punctuation marks should be corrected. Review chapter 3: I "had" to tell you,

Chapter 9: "Except Dad, everyone else will have 3 chances to guess the gift." Numeric 3 must be literal in the word.

Chapter 8: "There were 2 spells to be used". Numeric 2 must be literal in words.

Chapter8: It should be reviewed "This bag was invested by the famous scientists of Zeus"...

Of course! The writer's pen has established ideas for victory. This is a very fascinating story. Readers are getting accustomed to reading it. The author is climbing the ladder of success.

Fabulous! This is a great novel for Mary Christmas presents. Wow! Best gift to readers. The use of simple language and proverbs reflects the best understanding of the stories in each chapter.