bro it's osam that you are making it. I really have been going crazy on the original other. please make sure you put all harem andlots of r18 and romace bro. you must write more and longer in r18 with harem bro.

you better have some romance and r18 bro it's incomplete without harem you know it's really need a harem r18 ,o give him more MC vibe my boy like f. . . all harem and don't give a shit to no one and be unstoppable.

are you f. .. .. . kidding me bro mc doesn't even have one lovers from his continent but have one in on other world my boy make some reason give the girls of 1000best continent and his summon girls his lovers you know r18 bro you really need to work on this

and why the f. .. mc lotaring around but not doing anything to hins own harem bro are for real he doesn't do his erly lovers but go around hear and there having lovers man you need to work with things the people and more r18 ch you know my boy work with this one

the f. . . are you doing bro you know the romance bro like r18 type if don't have fun things what the are making bro give some human transformation like mc vibe you know and without harem it's not complet my boy it needs r18 you know stop kid's story now do S some hardcore bro you know

are you for real bro no r18 no MC harem for God. .. .. . bro you need pak the punch man get the MC vibe bro it's already 2000 mc noise you know it f. .. .. . boring just give a skinshep ki. .. you get ring bro hit up🤟

only so so and you say r18 are you faking kiding bro it not even MC r18 the are you writeing without harem bro get the mc r18 harem bro Or story won't sit at all in 1000 ch you just faking put air and no r18 bro. 🖕

STOP making MC looking noob. his a Otherworlder for gods sake. make him headstrong and leader. why all a shep riding. Man stop making MC only have power for show and the give him some strong sword or spear for mele fight. if mc can't even mele fight what's the f. .. . MC for. man please make mc a real mc like you know what am taking about. like a badass fighter and look.

It's not bad all. just a little more serious MC and a harem or more romance. well keep up the good work. please release more chapters. O the expression of mc look good in confidence.

man all good but too much of a "good guy" mc should just die and really no no harim ok.. but no deep Romance.. really? keep it up. bro just give more thrill

this story is ossaaaammmm. man op mc and beautys. just need more romance and harem it would be perfect. at least get lan yu in. overall it good. keep it up.

daamm keep up the story continues with some romance.

man that was osam story you you write there. keep making lite novels like this. it's a story please write more like this with little more details in things. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

I just started read it Resantly. please make mc look cool and not some perverted dumbo who head over heels for girls. oh, please use some love and romance from both sides so it will be ooossaaamm. good luck I Will be waiting for more ch.

keep it up with more serious mc.

I really need this story to update fast. and please write a little panch and romance. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

it's a interesting story make it go on and give some romance in girls side