This story has incredible potential, and the author's understanding of characters has managed to compliment the plot, little mistakes were seen here and there, but as far as I know everyone makes mistakes, you have a great skill of story telling and keep building on it😁❤️, a suggestion from me is that you should avoid over explaining things some times it's good but some times it disrupts continuity. overall it has been a very good read and waiting for the next chapters. Your understanding of your characters is just out of the league, as a writer I envy you. you're amazing. keep it up.😅❤️
Amazing understanding of characters and plot, and the emotions were clearly shown, mind-blowing skill in story development and explanation. overall it's a good emotional read.😍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I just wish I get more time to read this novel with a calm peaceful mind.
The intriguing way of story telling is just out of the world, poetic narration of characters and their feelings, the constant melancholic feeling that keeps you stuck to the book, just like a bottle of wine. addictive and mind numbing. Amira you have this amazing power of beautifying the script, nourish it and I bet you will be a star.💖💖💖
Amazing proficiency in writing and extremely intriguing way of characterisation, background is clearly explained and the plot is perfectly understood by the writer, has been a good read!! keep charming!!❤️💖😉
Amazing Narration and Excellent understanding of emotions, makes the reader barge into the story, keep it up Shivanya, you made my day, update soon!!🤩🔥❤️
Amazing proficiency in expressions, the quality of writing is top notch and the story is intriguing, presentation of the scene is little complicated but the mind boggling characterisation overshadowed it, lots of love!! BTW gimme some writing tips on discord 😅😉
Actually the red coloured reverse cross is the symbol of the antagonist 😅, Thank you so much for the review, means a lot😍🤗🥰