OneshotMaco
I like reading anything fantasy and sci-fi.I despise gender-bender and yaoi.Hate stupid plots where FML manipulates MC into doing things he wouldn't normally do or change his mind.
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OneshotMaco2dReplied to The_Thunder_LordTrue, but to me as a reader or 'overseer' it seems a stupid reaction that happens far to often. Though u as a author are correct in its usage as their are many people who would react like that in this situation, so I would have to agree with you. Heck I know some people who would spend hours contemplating if they were dreaming or in an illusion. Hope you have a great night and an surge of creativity tomorrow.
He knew that this was just a game, but the sight of her breasts and the way they jiggled with each movement made it hard for him to resist.- OneshotMaco2dCommented
Why he still think he in the game ? I mean he is but it's now a reality to him.
He knew that this was just a game, but the sight of her breasts and the way they jiggled with each movement made it hard for him to resist. - OneshotMaco2dReplied to juSTAbystandR"Oh, come on!We're out of school now. Just call me COCO. I'm practically your sister's friend, no need to be so formal." COCO replied, looking at Victoria. " Don't be shy. Call my name."
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If bros from the future why would he need to have others contact for info when he should know most of the info already? Though I get having contact info for their movements and or being friends, if he is from the future he should hold way more info then they could ever provide.
John didn't refuse. After all, it's necessary for Awakeners to exchange information and share some intelligence with each other. - OneshotMaco2dReplied to ShadowLordAlpha
I mean knowing that she betrayed him in the future means she has bad mindset and probably won't change much in this life either, so it's best to just eliminate or get away from the problem(her).
"I made it clear over the phone. We're breaking up," John said coldly. "Get lost, I don't want to see you again." - OneshotMaco2dReplied to OneshotMaco
Later in the story the comma's seem to be used properly, so idk if it's just the sentences around this one that is capitalizing after comma's or not. Sorry if I'm saying something completely unnecessary.
'I could feel its intention, When I first transmigrated, Because of my fear of the unknown and anxiety,' - OneshotMaco2dCommented
Why the author capitalizing the first word after each comma? Idk if they know not too or not tbh. If not, you are only supposed to capitlalize after the ending of the sentence or when ur trying to draw attention to a specific situation or exaggerating something like 'Wow' 'Amazing' depending ont he situation. Comma's don't end sentence there's used to split a sentence into different components, like a small break in a sentence. I'm not an english teacher or someone specializing in english so don't hold me accountable if I'm saying something wrong with my explanation, this is just my take on how comma's are used. Not hating on the author, just confused on why the author is capitalizing the first word after each sentence. Sorry for my rant and hope you have a great day.
'I could feel its intention, When I first transmigrated, Because of my fear of the unknown and anxiety,' - OneshotMaco5dReplied to NunuXD
Yw
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*Liv would practice with Ethan. I think
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Is in the background 👁️👄👁️
As much as it could make us rich, I'd rather keep my family's privacy to myself than have strangers on the Internet watching us interact and doing who knows what with our video. - OneshotMaco6dCommented
Ethan be like-
So instead of answering my mom right away, I just stroked Liv's back to make her feel better while I looked at Ethan, who practically had stars in his eyes when he looked at me. - OneshotMaco6dCommented
*150kg I think
Jerry, though fat, is a little thinner than I was when I weighed 150 pounds, so not only did he make fun of me for not having money at family parties at my grandparents' house, but he also made fun of me for my weight as a way of self-affirming that he wasn't as fat as he looked. - OneshotMaco8dReplied to CAESAR20
I'm not trying to seek a answer from u. I was just commenting my thoughts at that moment of reading. Though this is a late comment/reply. I don't mean anything against the novel/character, it's just in my opoinion that anyone who has read anything cultivation or martial arts related should know how bad impurity cleansing is. Not that u have to answer as I'm not seeking one, it's just didn't make sense at the time to me, that he didn't know how bad it was.
"Damn, these are my only clothes. , . At least you could have warning me, System" - OneshotMaco11dCommented
I.. I was... wrong
I knew it couldn't be Ethan, he was just learning to play the ukulele and had no idea how to play the violin. - OneshotMaco12dCommented
Why is it so important that her parents has to agree when you can see how opposing and annoying the mother and father are.
After Xu Ruoying finished speaking, she hung up the phone and smiled at Feng Lin, "She agreed that I don't have to marry Song Keming." - OneshotMaco12dCommented
We just see Ethan maniplulating a ukulele so good that it sound like a violin.
But to my surprise, just as I was thinking about how to deal with it, I heard a violin noise coming from upstairs. - OneshotMaco12dReplied to WPOmegaTouching her increasingly hungry stomach, Li Wan Ning said somewhat sheepishly, "...Can we have some more food? We haven't eaten in a long time…"
- OneshotMaco12dReplied to gaurav_Kumar_1424"Construct now!"
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Remember the apocalypse just started and the school this is near, everyone is hiding in the warehouse
Ignoring the zombie corpses on the ground, Alex hurriedly opened his spatial bag and stuffed it with snacks and water from the shelves.