Te recomiendo que antes de publicar esa reseña en español, la pongas en el traductor de Google, y la traduces al inglés, le resultas más facil a los autores.

are you Spanish speaking? ? lol, I never would have imagined it

I read that he had died on March 1, but his death was announced today, is that true?

I imagine that the update rate will drop, because if it continues like this...

I would say yes XD

a single here Xd

Naruko no es hija de MC, es hija de Minato, el autor sólo le cambió el género.

JAJAJAJAJA

If I hadn't read the other comments I wouldn't have realized that I've already read 100 chapters xd

With his luck he surely made twins for everyone except Rebecca XD

Forget it, he was probably drunk at that moment.

The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.

Weren't there pages to check if the grammar is correct? Would it be easier to paste the chapter on one of those pages before having to verify it yourself?

Peter couldn't save Lois 😔

What is the need to give false names? I know that the names are perfectly understood, but since you put the names of the teams, put the names of the players

I say this in the role of Actor, since according to his character he should not know.

I found this chapter a bit strange, mainly how the protagonist knew that this was a white Zetsu? Since I knew THAT it was a white zetsu, it wasn't mentioned in the story I think.

but if he moved to naruto, he would have to find a way to broadcast the games, besides it is not known how much population the shinobi world had, right?

good chapter

good chapter