So this is just the doll gamer by: redwall6921 on fanficion.com so if you want to read it you should there as of ch 20 of this you would be a little over halfway through the fifth chapter on fanfiction.net which has a total of 23 chapters

I’m pretty sure this is just an exact copy of A Percise Note By: Sir Lucifer Morningstar on FanFiction.Net

Honestly The idea is awesome but it can be kind confusing And hard to follow at times but I think if the author Keeps updating It could become a great story

The idea of the story is really good but the problem Comes from the bad grammar and writing I think that if the author would use something like grammarly or simply proof read his work he could fix most of his problems

The idea of this story is great but the writing Quality Kinda ruins it I was barely Able to get through 6 chapters Because the wrong ting QuaLity made it feel like I had to force my self to keep going and that just made it so I couldn’t Enjoy Reading it

I wish I could post this while giving This story an even lower rating But I can this person stole this story from paradox and has started To claim it’s His he has even been deleting Every comment That is a low rating Or is revealing That truth that he blatantly stole this story from someone else this person is literally Garbage For doing Something like That

I made a review Earlier That gave a higher Rating But this story while at the beginning If you can get over the grammar, spelling, and other problems It is a pretty decent Story but as time goes On it gets worse and worse to the point Where it hurts to read the only thing the author has been doing at this point is a fast and consistent update so eed

Overall the Idea and how the author Goes about it is really good I also like the mixed dc and marvel elements but there is two issues I have with this story which is that the author makes grammatical and spelling errors but this could be fixed by simply using something like grammarly the other issue I have is the update speed which is on the slow side

+1

I Think this is a great story But there are some flaws such as slight grammatical errors here and there but none that are that bad but what really bothers me is how the author calls certain ability’s such as the author calling armament haki weapon haki or when the Mc get purgatory dragon slayer magic he calls the attacks things like roar of the dragon of purgatory instead of something like purgatory dragon roar like they do in the fairy tail anime