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Review Detail of James_Blake in New devil in multiverse

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James_Blake
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The idea of the story is really good but the problem Comes from the bad grammar and writing I think that if the author would use something like grammarly or simply proof read his work he could fix most of his problems

New devil in multiverse

Ainz_Sama_1234

Liked it!

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Ainz_Sama_1234AuthorAinz_Sama_1234

thanks for suggestion

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Ainz_Sama_1234AuthorAinz_Sama_1234

Thanks for the suggestion it's helping.