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Why is Mizuto's action always justified by comparing it to historical figures? I mean, we get why he is doing what he is doing. It feels weird when every time he does something, he is compared to a famous historical figure.
Testament of Sister New Devil.
+1
god the Cringeeeeeeee
JokeR
+1, it is a nice theme to make a story on but have you to make the reason for hunting eternals a good one.
I mean like why?? the story was going so well, the author must have known the conseuqnces of ntr but he did it anyway. Using a little of my experience I can ty lee falling in love with xing and becoming a lover to both azula and xing. Sighhhhhhh
Normal Tyranitar (This is better)
Shiny
The story is good but still has its share of flaws. First in my opinion I felt that the protagonist is too gary stu, Second all the chapters always ends in a poetic manner. Its fine for one or two chapters but every chapter ends in the artistic manner which renders the charm of these types of endings ineffective.
Peter is like a volcano waiting to erupt
My sixth sense is telling me that this may become an important plot point in future