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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna2yr
    Replied to YouJustDontWanna

    And also, even if you have permission to post it here, at least put the link to the original story.

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    HP: Tainted Desire
    Book&Literature · Lazy_Ryuu
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna2yr
    Commented

    Right........ Let's go to a 4 star restaurant, where god is the chef. I really wonder how she could afford it, considering literally no one else in the world has ever been to one before. You're trying too hard to make things extravagant.

    Kyōka nodded and replied. "Yes... I have never been to a place like this, every restaurant that I've been to are no lower than 4 stars, the people there are too formal, which I found very boring, but compared to this..is better than those famous restaurants boring atmosphere, I originally thought that you would bring me to a rated restaurant but this was unexpected to me, still, I am more content of this rather than that."
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    My Unconventional Delivery System!
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna2yr
    Commented

    Dude, please update the auxiliary chapter. Add all the girls in the harem, and maybe a short description of the others. For example who Kaya is, who her mother is etc...

    Ch 179 Ch179. Jirayia in Uzushio 3
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    In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Commented

    She should be the head of the Housewife Association. Or the head of the Rei Fanclub. Or the Head priestess of the religion of their lord and savior Rei.

    "Well, I am in the process of making a new hidden village, you see. I need somebody capable to be my Jonin Commander." Rei shrugged. Konan already called dibs on the secretary role, Tsunade wanted to be the head of the medics, Ringo quickly decided she would pull the reins of Hunter Squads and ANBU, and Mei decided she would be a housewife.
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    In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
    Anime & Comics · KasiCair
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    I don't want the MC to NOT have problems, but having a dude constantly plotting to bring ruin to the mc is annoying af, I really hope you don't make the noble slaver too much of a problem. Apart from that it's really nice. Just waiting for the magic to happen and for the whole family to be in love with the mc [img=update].

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    My New Life as a Catgirl
    LGBT+ · WritingSimulator
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    Piece of sh8t stole the story, don't support him. And Shiro didn't ask to create new accounts, he said IF we have webnovel accounts. The author even pinged the only 5 star reviews he has, which are probably from his alternate accounts.

    This book has been deleted.
  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    Very nice, I'm not too far into it, but the character seems to be developing a bit. Just a question, will there ever be a relationship between MC and Hestia/Theia?

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    The Immortal's Wine Store
    Eastern · Malignant
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    Writing quality is good though has recently become less than average. The author wants to catch up to his promised updates, so the chapters are a lot shorter and rushed recently. (AUTHOR IT'S ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CATCH UP, TAKE YOUR TIME, THE RECENT CHAPTERS ARE SHORT, RUSHED AND THEIR QUALITY HAS DROPPED A LOT). Stability of updates is alright. Character design, is nothing special

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    The H.P.S. (Hentai Protagonist System) [Old Version]
    Anime & Comics · Zakirael
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    Oh how I wish he updated a lot more. Writing quality is one of the best I have ever seen. Story development is awesome, though slower than usual, because there are no illogical things happening; everything has a reason and the women don't suddenly have s8x with him 2 days after meeting him. Character design is awesome, there is no contradiction of character so far. World background I can't comment upon, so far we have only heard of the rural town and the capital without anything else.

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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    Writing quality is top notch. Story development is very good, though I wish he reveals his identity soon (to all the people he cares about). Character design is awesome, all of them have weaknesses, act different, have a different way of speech and there is never a contradiction of character without reason. The world background is good, as far as I know it's as if he created a whole new universe. MC doesn't act like a dumb harem protagonist so that's a plus.

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    The Incubus System
    Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
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  • YouJustDontWanna
    YouJustDontWanna3yr
    Posted

    In terms of character design, I can't really say much. The story is currently too short to have a very good picture of the characters. One thing I can say though is that the characters aren't dumb harem protagonists, they actually behave like normal people. Stability of updates good, but the author has too many stories, so they're slow. World background is awesome, reason for reincarnation finally has some form of logic.

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    The Dragon King's Harem System
    Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
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