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abu_saeed1mthPosted- abu_saeed3mthCommented
This guy was living protagonist life even before getting a system.
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The story is very disappointing. Or maybe, I just expected too much. You constantly try to make your mc appear better than the original Cid, but your mc is just boring. While original Cid is the best part of Eminence in Shadow. And you either don't know much about solo leveling power systems. Or you can't use them in this story. It's all over the place. And the story is just plain Bad.
- abu_saeed6mthReplied to Laron_Shawn
What are you talking about? Hiashi's twin brother was marked, why do you think Hinata's younger sister won't be?
'Now that Hinata's marked by Orochimaru's seal that affects her chakra network, the caged bird seal which also affects the user's chakra network can't be placed on her. So he promoted Hanabi to become the heir that way when Hinata becomes strong, judging by the way she is going, it would be the case. He wouldn't have to worry about Hanabi being marked as she is younger...' - abu_saeed6mthPosted
So the story is good. But you are progressing way too slowly. The problem with fanfics is that everyone is already familiar with the source material. So, there is a limit to how much I can enjoy or invest in the story knowing it's filler. I don't know how much of the story you have planned. I suggest you make your OCs interact with canon characters and canon events more. Having an OC story with non-canon events isn't good for a fanfic. Your writing quality is very good, so I read one of your original works. It is considerably better than this, in my opinion, because even if something that happened there were to be insignificant later it doesn't hinder my investment now. It's not the same with fanfics
- abu_saeed6mthReplied to ultimategod
Who are you confirming these things with? It is confirmed that she is female, Oda himself confirmed it in a SBS. And Yamato doesn't even want to be a male. She just wants to be Oden.
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How did that happen? can someone explain? His father or mother f'd a Goblin
"Very well said Harry. I'm proud of you." He said happily before looking at everyone. " Let me tell you all my experience. I am a half-goblin born in this very land. I too faced immense challenges but as Harry said, an eagle never gives up even if it has to become cruel to itself. I fought, I became a charm master, an international duelling champion and the head of Ravenclaw house in Hogwarts. So Never give up." - abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 31 Awakening the Conqueror Haki and getting a discipledetailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 30 Saving the tragic Donquixote familydetailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 29 Activate the big plan? The Famous Straw Hat Pirates across the four seasdetailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 28 Baratie Arc! Nami breaks fans' hearts...detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 27 Manga? This is a fishy story, but it's still very interesting!detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 26 Bell-mère, Teenage and naughty!detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 25 Conomi Islands!detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- abu_saeed1yrCommentedCh 24 The interacting of fans with the new volume.detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH