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  • Tillah_
    Tillah_5mth
    Replied to MinMinOppa

    I’ll try my best. Thanks for all the support. <3

    I found out that in canon the orphan trio worked as Ame ninjas for a while before forming Akatsuki, but I don't want to rewrite my story so in my story the trio never worked as Ame ninjas.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    If I really wanted to make a professional book, I would make sure to do the proper research before hand to make sure there are not any plotholes. But I just don’t want to do that as it would take most of my fun out of writing.

    I found out that in canon the orphan trio worked as Ame ninjas for a while before forming Akatsuki, but I don't want to rewrite my story so in my story the trio never worked as Ame ninjas.
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  • Tillah_
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    To be honest I don’t really plan out this story. I am writing mostly for fun, and as I am not the best writer there is going to be plotholes no matter what. So I would just rather ignore them and continue writing it however I want.

    I found out that in canon the orphan trio worked as Ame ninjas for a while before forming Akatsuki, but I don't want to rewrite my story so in my story the trio never worked as Ame ninjas.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to commander_pride_21

    Don’t worry it wont

    While chakra itself doesn't naturally have its own consciousness ( Bijuu aside as they are technically artificially created by the Sage of Six Paths.) I have found that the more I meditate and purify my own chakra, the more alive it feels. This comes with upsides and downsides.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    Yep.

    As I finish my thoughts I can feel my chakra break past some sort of limiter. As the limiter is shattered I can feel the chakra surge through my body in excitement, dancing through my body and widening my already well developed tenketsu. As I feel that happening I draw in some natural energy from the surroundings and let it flow through my body like the first time I unlocked my chakra.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    Tbh I havent even watched the movies so probably not. But I think their are already enough opportunities for the MC to plunder.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to Myriad

    I just checked and it says that he stayed with them for 3 years so I guess we are both wrong…

    'It is almost time. Once I arrive in Ame it will be time for the trio of orphans to start recruiting for Akatsuki. It is in my best interests to join early as I will have time to build up the trust with the most important members.
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  • Tillah_
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    You think so?

    'It is almost time. Once I arrive in Ame it will be time for the trio of orphans to start recruiting for Akatsuki. It is in my best interests to join early as I will have time to build up the trust with the most important members.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    He is a few years younger. He is 6 and the orphans are 9-10 on my fic at least. It is hard to get there ages proper but they we’r still kids when they were taught by Jiraiya I think

    Ch 18 Chapter 18
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  • Tillah_
    Tillah_5mth
    Replied to Devang98

    Sorry to hear that. I hope the rest of the story is to your liking. I myself feel that I havr already improved in my writing.

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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MediocreSkater

    Sorry. I am not very good at writing, and I myself am not a very emotional person so it can be hard for me to portray emotions very well.

    Hardening his resolve and continuing on his journey he thinks about his plans for the near future.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to Naruto1881

    Good ideas! But I don’t think I will be going on the cresting a village route. That has already been done in ‘In Naruto: Reborn with talent’ a great novel btw. I will be taking some of your ideas though so thanks!

    Ch 16 Chapter 16
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    True. But I will just leave it how it is. Maybe in the future I will do something to fix the plot holes.

    "ANBU bring me chunin Zabuza Momochi."
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    Tbh I don’t know. I don’t know if Zabuza’s age is ever mentioned in canon, All I know was he was alive and working as a ninja before yagura took over as the mizukage. Honestly he might be the same age as kakashi in canon, if you really need a reason just think this is an aged up au Zabuza.

    "ANBU bring me chunin Zabuza Momochi."
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to Myriad

    Totally forgot about that. Will make sure to mention something about that in one of the later chapters. Thanks!

    I hope in the future my body will completely adapt and then I will be able to make my own sage mode.
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  • Tillah_
    Tillah_5mth
    Replied to MinMinOppa

    I also looked up the definition for fuinjutsu, but rather than just copying it I would rather make my own spin on it. It is definitely not just me being lazy knowing if I make one thing realistic, I will have to put in a lot of time doing research to make the rest realistic. ;)

    Some people may think that you can do anything with fuinjutsu but that is wrong. You can only seal stuff with fuinjutsu.
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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to merlin_

    I will try to get four, 1kish length chapters every day. I have them in a timer to release at 8,12,4, and 8 o clock est. I may increase or decrease the amount in the coming weeks depending on how I fare in the coming weeks. :)

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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  • Tillah_
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    After dropping my other fanfic, I decided to give writing another try, hopefully this one will last longer. This probably won’t be a harem. Hope you enjoy! :)

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  • Tillah_
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    Replied to MinMinOppa

    I thought it was more of a Senju thing as tsunade had it and used it to create her creation rebirth technique or whatever it is called. Maybe not though.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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  • Tillah_
    Tillah_5mth
    Replied to Lycarus

    Maybe. Haven’t decided yet, if there is it will be very small.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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