I’ll try my best. Thanks for all the support. <3
If I really wanted to make a professional book, I would make sure to do the proper research before hand to make sure there are not any plotholes. But I just don’t want to do that as it would take most of my fun out of writing.
To be honest I don’t really plan out this story. I am writing mostly for fun, and as I am not the best writer there is going to be plotholes no matter what. So I would just rather ignore them and continue writing it however I want.
Don’t worry it wont
Tbh I havent even watched the movies so probably not. But I think their are already enough opportunities for the MC to plunder.
I just checked and it says that he stayed with them for 3 years so I guess we are both wrong…
You think so?
He is a few years younger. He is 6 and the orphans are 9-10 on my fic at least. It is hard to get there ages proper but they we’r still kids when they were taught by Jiraiya I think
Sorry to hear that. I hope the rest of the story is to your liking. I myself feel that I havr already improved in my writing.
Sorry. I am not very good at writing, and I myself am not a very emotional person so it can be hard for me to portray emotions very well.
Good ideas! But I don’t think I will be going on the cresting a village route. That has already been done in ‘In Naruto: Reborn with talent’ a great novel btw. I will be taking some of your ideas though so thanks!
True. But I will just leave it how it is. Maybe in the future I will do something to fix the plot holes.
Tbh I don’t know. I don’t know if Zabuza’s age is ever mentioned in canon, All I know was he was alive and working as a ninja before yagura took over as the mizukage. Honestly he might be the same age as kakashi in canon, if you really need a reason just think this is an aged up au Zabuza.
Totally forgot about that. Will make sure to mention something about that in one of the later chapters. Thanks!
I also looked up the definition for fuinjutsu, but rather than just copying it I would rather make my own spin on it. It is definitely not just me being lazy knowing if I make one thing realistic, I will have to put in a lot of time doing research to make the rest realistic. ;)
I will try to get four, 1kish length chapters every day. I have them in a timer to release at 8,12,4, and 8 o clock est. I may increase or decrease the amount in the coming weeks depending on how I fare in the coming weeks. :)
After dropping my other fanfic, I decided to give writing another try, hopefully this one will last longer. This probably won’t be a harem. Hope you enjoy! :)
I thought it was more of a Senju thing as tsunade had it and used it to create her creation rebirth technique or whatever it is called. Maybe not though.