Why translate something at all if you do it so badly? This is nothing more than a slightly edited MTL, and although some may be satisfied with even such poor quality, I am not one of them. And even worse, the plot is pretty mediocre. I only read the first world, but it was only so-so. There were no unexpected moments, no turning points, not even a decent romance... Perhaps if there was a perfect translation, it would be possible to tolerate because there are practically no Yuri quick transmigration novels, but alas, with the current quality it does not deserve attention.

Gender bender... again... Just why??? Even if it's just a small detail and doesn't have a strong impact on the story, I won't be able to forget this and enjoy the story anymore. Alas, although there seems to be potential, but I have to drop...

This story is a merged plot between Overlord and Eminence in Shadow - I'm not sure how true this is, but what can be said with certainty is that the story definitely does not hook you from the first chapters as the above-mentioned works... Well, chapter 1 is more or less reminiscent of all the anime about the reincarnation of the hero and the demon lord, but Yuri style. It's okay. But then 10 chapters about nothing. Just random events and battles... Seriously, the fact that the author uses endless Povs of insignificant characters does not magically make the story an Overlord... well, whatever. And then I realized that it was genderbender. And although the author wrote something in the comments that because soul has changed, then in theory it can be considered Yuri... Well, the author can consider whatever they wants, but for me MC will always be remembered as a formerly guy. Summing all that up, I, unfortunately, have to drop this...

Apparently, it is not my destiny to read the works of this author. I'm already trying theirs fourth book, and every time I drop... Worst of all, I have nothing to say in general that will justifie 2 or 3 star rating. The books are generally quite high-quality (except for Moonlight Demon, everything is really bad there), but they just fail to interest me.

That can work too in a way. Then I'll rephrase the question just to be sure - does MC have Straight romance in her life, no matter how small it is.

Yuri's theme is more of a secondary in this book. I'll try to make the flow natural. Sisterhood is more prevalent in the plot. ----- Hi. Has anything changed about this?

I have read 30 chapters. I really wanted to love this work, but I just couldn't... Usually when I write bad reviews, I devote most of them to logical holes and other irrationalities of the author... but in the case of this work, there are other problems (some of them are very subjective and may even be a plus for someone). 1) Unhealthy relationships. It feels like absolutely any relationship in the work has a different degree of unhealthiness (whether it's parents and children, lovers or a master-servant)... Well, partly this can be said about real life, but still, here it is brought to the extreme. 2) Abuse and torture stuff. I have nothing against that when the story requires it, but it seemed that the author just wondered if they could write it, and went on a writing spree and gave out several dark chapters in a row. When such heavy topics are thrown in huge quantities without any purpose, it just becomes boring and tasteless! 3) Creative magic. Well... the author tried. But didn't succeed. Well, perhaps in future chapters the author will make that mess recognizeble, but right now it feels like a lot of random cool concepts without any clay between. 4) Well, the author mentions this quite early, but there will be a rapidly developing romance with SM inclinations and much more unhealthy moments. Keep in mind. 5) The overall pace. The work is very inconsistent and the author feels the lack of writing style. We jump all the time from chapters full of inner monologues to full action. One second we get the thoughts of one character, the next line we switch our attention to the second. Slice of life abruptly turns to magic expositions, and than to romance. And so in everything. Sometimes I just get lost. I want to pay attention to one topic, but the author has already moved on to something else. In general, I can consider this novell as a bad copy of typical Korean romantic novels. P.S. A particularly subjective point, but in one chapter where the heroine talked about how her magic would be working with tattoos, there was the phrase "it was fair for her to worry that her partner might not like her future aesthetic." And although her partner obviously didn't mind, the same can't be said for me... And as for her partner herself, she's tall , toned, with abs and muscles... It is seriously annoying that every second author uses such type in yuri novels.

To be honest, when this kind of "dark" chapters go on in a row, it gets boring. Not disturbing, just boring. I am glad that it will end from now on

It's a little unclear why, if her mother is so afraid of the consequences, she didn't stop the baron sooner. Especially considering the hints that she is potentially stronger than him. Well, okay...

race change is something more unique like a fox Did I understand correctly that mc will become a fox and you consider it unique choise? I'm not hinting at anything, but a fox is clearly the most common choice for a female heroine.

To be honest, although I appreciate the passion of the author (daily updates) and free chapters, I unfortunately have to drop. 1 The whole world feels very "naive" and straightforward. One dimencional. There are bad guys, there are good guys. Everything works directly and openly, no tricks and other things. Such a world seems rather ridiculous. 2 I don't feel the chemistry between the heroines. And I can't believe the depth of their feelings. They had a high school romance for a year before reincarnation, but this does not at all explain their obsession with each other during the 15 years of their new life... moreover, the obsession is quite superficial. Although Kaede vows to find her lover in the new world, she does absolutely nothing to do so. (And considering the guild's very convenient message system, one could at least try) 3 The author is trying to make a work from the perspective of 2 heroines. And unfortunately, I can't call it a success. On the one hand, we have the vampire Kaede, who got interesting action scenes, a "hard past" and absolutely OP. But in contrast to this, she is an absolute idiot (it would seem that living under the eternal fear of death should teach you something??? But no. She's just suicidal. The problem is not finding her. She finds them). She also developed the complex of a typical issekai hero - saving slaves and killing slavers... And the worst part is that she was followed by absolutely uninteresting characters (these same former slaves). On the other hand, we have the aristocrat Yui - she passes through a typical academic arc. She is also strong, but in a more realistic sense (not at the level I killed a god at the age of 5, but - I train hard and am the strongest among my peers). She has a friend with whom the reader builds a strong emotional connection. Her various acquaintances are also interesting in general. But any action scenes with her are of course very bad, because it makes little sense to watch her kill goblins when the first heroine hunts a dragon. Well, in general, there are practically no interesting events in her life. It would be a perfect Slice of Life, but alas. To be honest, I would be more interested in a different story.: - Just a Yui story. Add more plot and depth to it, give her Luna as a partner, and it won't be very unique, but a decent story. - Either the same thing, a pair of Yui +Luna against a crazy Kaede. It will be quite dramatic, but also interesting.

I'm thinking about whether it's worth reading. The reviews are quite controversial. Although many against epilogue of volume 1, what about the rest of the book? The author has become better and has given a satisfactory story and ending, or there will be more "unpleasant" and "controversial" moments?

Well, then I'll wait until you finish editing and come back later. But speaking of your "It's important to approach literature with an open mind". If you write for fun or for the sake of improving your writing skills or for some other reasons that do not include getting a large audience and a stable income, you can write as you wish. Otherwise, sometimes it's worth thinking about how to please potential readers. Anyway, good luck. See you later.

I haven't started reading the work itself yet, but these names... Author, tell me honestly, are you from a country with hieroglyphs or a similar alphabet without concept of Capital letters? And just look at this sentence. --mengxi (the child of Disney, the chosen one , the female lead , the heroin , the saintess)-- 1) The name begins with a small letter ... 2) Here and in the rest of the chapter there is some kind of mixture of Chinese and Western names. 3) Heroin... It's a drug No offense, of course, but after such an initial chapter, many will simply drop...

jinxed?

I saw "chat group" plus "yuri", decided to give it a try. I always wanted to read something with a chat group thing, but refrained after seeing 1000+ chapters and all that. Unfortunately, this try was quite disappointing. The author has an extremely sporadic writing style. He's telling us something and makes me intrigued... and then it's never mentioned (at least not in the nest chapters), and the author jumps to the next topic. And so on in a circle. It's like writing an essay without a draft and a plan. PS. Having the talent of accelerated learning * 100, I doubt that such a person would devote most of their time to dull CEO work.

Up to chapter 20 is still good. I am glad that the author does not devote entire chapters to 18+ activities, but limited such to a few paragraphs. Speaking of cons, heroines have no explicit goals yet, so as a reader, I kind of lack anticipation.

To be honest, when I saw "gradually lessen and evolved into romance", I assumed that "gradually" would take a little more than a couple of chapters... And I hoped this novel would be mode dark themed. But other than that, it's not bad so far.

So... no final chapter?

The villainess of the first world, before their(her and mc) death from old age, will bind their souls with black magic, so that they will become kind of soulmates and reunite in all following worlds.