A gem of a book, very well structured, although there are parts that are unfinished, but from there the best, I hope the author does not abandon it.

It's seriously tiring with the Loki family thing. There is a series of novels where he goes to Danmamchi and coincidentally meets Loki or is in his territory. this concept is already very burned

Simply having honkai gakuen is already better. I just wanted to ask what era or timeline this is in? , since Honkai Gakuen is divided into several, but the very rotisimos characters arriving at the multiversal

Mini Madara's performance is good.

I don't like ichika he's stupid 😶😶👍

I don't like ichika, hit him, 😶😶😎

If you put it like that, she even went to Yuhao without telling her boyfriend, NTR's first clues

Seriously, it's annoying that Archer is very peaceful, I'm also already bored with that knight princess, I hope you humiliate her and kill her for being so annoying.

Likewise, creating roads, you hear great things, corruption and everything that involves roads is god.

If it involves LOTM I'm in, there aren't that many LOTM fanfics these days, I hope you do well because the novel is very long and has a lot of information. By the way, this is my first review, I hope you update it.

Thanks for the chapter, bro, how will the relationship between na'in and tan wulin be, it will be like naruto and sasuke, na'in dark part and wulin part light I say xd :v

They would not then be of a creator level, since they can even travel in time and space, and also with the alternate dimension of giratino.

As far as I know dialga, palkia and giratino are not from the creation trio made by arceus?

May he become amon, infecting every being he sees with his worms.

ayaka sajyou

Autor emiya podría ser un campeón, quiero decir no es tan diferente, en sus muchos viajes ya qué hablamos de Multiverse habría viajado a otros mundos y salvarlos convirtiendolo en uno.

It satisfies me, the beating of those mrd blondes, I hope he continues to make life impossible for them, it's better if there are also those disgusting fat people.

author, I hope you don't make him get involved in all the demons' problems like a nosy as if it were his responsibility, in several fanfic they do that and it's very annoying, that they get into where they are not called just for being in the plot. DXD demons are very annoying thinking big, looking down on humans, when they depend on them for survival. And for me the group where it would fit would be with Vali's, since it can have more adventures than with the boring plot of rias and the later ones.

Interesting development, get them all down and command respect in the class. It would be great if you give him the powers and the strength of the original izayoi would be op.

Si se va a Atg puede que se haga fuerte rápido juntando los tesoros.