Its a great story and an interesting read. Something is definietly off with ruby and I cant wait to read more. The plot is definIetly unique so I’ll defiinetly read till the end. Well done author! Great work!!!

I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!

Great description

The more chapters I read, I became more invested. I feel sorry for the male progonist - after everything he’d done for his old world 😭😭😭. I gave them all 5 because I feel you executed them well. There isn’t much else to say, I highly recommend the book!!! It captures your attention from the beginning, I’m impressed!

Its a good story and flowed really well! I’m curious about Ash, he has no ability but he’s indestructible?!?! I’m interested to know his backgroud, the plot is thought through, I’m curious to know where you’ll take this story. Great job 👏

I like it. Fucking disgusted with the King, Man needs to die 😤. The book is well written, and easy to follow. I’m impressed with the characters, and I’m hooked on the plot already. Great work 👏

I love you cliffhangers at the end of each chapter. It made me immediatly jump to the next chapter, that I hadn’t realised how far I reached into the story. Great work 👏

Thank-you!

I’m defintly a fan of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and I really like the development too. I’d say gramma needs a little work, but as english isn’t your first language, I really am impressed. Also, I think my favourite character is Ava!!

Oof, I’m loving the chemistry between the male and female protagonists, its INTENSE!!! I’m really curious to know the backstory as I’m only 5 chapters in, but oddly I already know what ever demons the male Protogonist is hiding, is going to make me cry - or at least I hope. Great job 👍

Don’t worry. The romance isn’t fast, Valarie will be spending many chapters fighting their bond, because she doesn’t believe in it. I don’t believe in the whole ‘love at first sight’ thing, but that’s just me 🤷‍♀️. But as it says in the synopsis, she only has one simple goal - and she’ll push through anyone to reach it, even her mate.

I hadn’t even realised how far into the book I’d reached until I paused to check the time. Its definietly a great story, I’m going to read till the end. All I have to say is that there’s a lot of information condensed into one chapter. It can be a little overwhelming as a reader, but apart from that I really am enjoying it. Great job 👍

Yeah. the progress is slow, and she doesn’t meet her lover until the end of chapter 2. But I promise, It’ll grt much more intense!!

Oof. I relate her

Its a great story so far, great job! I’M a fan of dirty, gory details so I’m definitly intrigued. Its not my type genre, but I enjoy a good plot and this book has it.

Your welcome!!!!

From the prologue, I was HOOKED already. It definetly isn’t what you expect it to be, and thats the BEST part. I like unexpected twists and turns, it keeps me coming back for more! I’d say gramma needs a ‘tiny’ bit of work, but don’t let that deter you. The plot is amazing, I’ve only read two chapters so far, but I will be reading the rest!!!!!!! I HAVE TOO MANY QUESTIONS TO STOP READING NOW!!!