Author when you write singing parts into your future fanfiction or novel's please just describe how the Mcs voice sounded like you don't need to write the entire song into the chapter plus please just add a few praises from the uchihas when the Mc finishes his song so they don't seem like robot's

Author again you need to slow down a bit it feels like your rushing things here Also how can a 2 year old child take care of himself even if this is the naruto universe that is ridiculous

Author I think this is a bit rushed for the beginning of your fanfiction please slow down and give some more dialog to the characters and you will see that it makes things better (well its my opinion) you don't have to listen to what I'm saying though..... Well I still liked the chapter good luck with your fanfiction

....nice chapter

Its great to see the TFS references good work author

Author I have a question how does Rudy know that his sisters will be born next year? I'm sorry if I sound stupid

wow Grim has balls unlike......*stares at the entire male population and the mirror*

Yo this novel seems to be a copy and paste of "an Uchihas tale"

I know you haven't posted a chapter in a while but I hope that you can continue your fan fiction as I really enjoyed it so far

I don't mind the op mc route for the story please keep writing this interesting story

in my opinion I think that the author did yet another great job on this chapter please keep writing

I think your doing an amazing job writing this author-ssi

please don't listen to negative comments and keep writing what you meant I think that your story is progressing in a fun and unique way so far

Author I think you did a great job writing the story so far I look forward to reading the next chapter but before that I hope you can pass your exams without any problems Good luck

Author-ssi you did extremely well for your first real combat scene keep up the great work! and thank you for the chapter

Author-ssi on Yamatos first line you forgot the t for the word first I also wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story so far thank you for the chapter.