I hate how these Harry Potter fanfics usually let's Ginny get the diary and not do anything to stop it or get the diary before the attacks. it kind of makes it your fault in part because you knew exactly what was going to happen and did nothing to help prevent it.

trying to bring a Kage into the group is just asking for it to be betrayed later on for the good of the village

I hope this won't turn into one of those stupid "infiltrating Akatsuki" fics

this whole thing with Orochimaru's research seems to be about unnecessary drama. why not be upfront with Minato about it? this is just asking for a pointless misunderstanding when Danzo inevitably brings it to light to discredit the MC

Doesn't he feel bad for also not helping his brother? "Oh no, I have to leave Naruto weak because of the plot." is not really a good excuse

Thanks. Darwin has been avenged.

Sorry for your loss

hope you don't turn him into a simp

don't forget Sarutobi. It was also largely due to his negligence in not dealing with Danzo before it came to that

I don't know if he counts as a good teacher. Even with advanced knowledge he still allowed Tenten, someone he was training to lose to Temari.

That is the dumbest thing I've heard. He had the Diadem in front of him but decided not to destroy the horcrux and get offset points?

it's perform not preform

I agree about not doing it. If you are just looking for enemies that could go against Andrew than just bring some characters from the Marvel Comics universe. No need to destroy the story by drastically changing it.

Hey, are you spelling these names wrong on purpose?

I think you meant swung his fist.

They are at best four or five years old. This just makes him seem like a pedophile.

the proper word is aesthetic

i'm really hoping the mc was joking about adding girls like Hinata to the harem. I am already not a big fan of mass harems, but i hate when it crosses the line to pedophilia.

I still feel that it partially his fault. He should've known from last year that he shouldn't try to stick to canon timeline. He should deal with all the known threats as soon as possible to avoid these types of things. I understand that the author doesn't want to do that because it is hard to write a lot of original content instead using canon as a guide, but still.

You do realize that Billy is actually a little kid right? Having a grown woman be romantically involved with a little kid is pedophilia.