Sigue esta bueno aunque deberías de agregar algo con chi siento yo como de algún manwha o algo que cambie de raza como una plantilla de nero o dante o la del dante angel/demonio o master chif no estaría mal.

Thanks for the chapter and for the another op character maybe baki o Daniel park , Yu the boxeer ,ohma from kengan or maybe Shiryu of OPM or garou Cpulbe a cool MTF or maybe any version Richard Dragon or his Pupil but I guess is to much dc maybe you sould change batman as some one like the cap america.

Whitout family I dont understand how can you be relatives with all ready characters is to much.

I guess they'll be be only on patreon but i doesn't have a update since may. so ABANDONED???🤨

Well its look like this is another one that will never continue, ibwonder how this site and fanfiction is still going on , i wish there is a ia that can write something cause chat gpt is not good for that.

Well it's look like you only going to update in patreon.

Thanks for the chapter please continue

Thank you and the part of the student you can made like overlord of a mc op have to deal with political issues and have interaction with marvel DC young heroes and use I don't know valeria moon girl and also the classic and found a purpose for the mc like be a hero playing evil or something like that and have interactions with asgard and loki like Odin confuse him as a Lokison.

Hello my friend about the re write of the first book I guess it's not necessary I guess the only that this need is For harry or hadrian the knowledge about marvel and dc and have some relation with thor an Loki like his son I remember that is a daughter of loki with her name was black so you can use hadrian to be a asgardian son of loki.

Bueno gracias por los capituñosnpero creo que o entrarás en pausa o lo dejarás pero fue bueno mientras duro.

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My opinim looks good I love the sentry and his design if you want to keep up use the sentry of dark avengers with gobles and rings in his arms so Keep going the plot looks interesting and I want some more so you can doit make your dreams come true dont get down an dont worry be happy.

Its a good one kep it up, I Like How this is not a bizarre harem fanfic and the protagonist is cool bit of I I'm honest you should use the ultimate forms or try to make it real with grey matter.

Continue yo can do it. good luck.

You can do it don't get down. I hope you can have inspiration to continued so good luck maybe see you later in this story or in another one.

muy bueno pero deberías de hacerlos un poco más largos por ejemplo lo de este capítulo cabía en el pasado. pero en si se está llevando la historia bien sigue así.

It is good but you can give the MC more development interactivity with other heroes and young heroes and sidekicks to make it more interesting.

good story i want to see more about it and I hope you still continue and thank you to publicated it you can doit and congratulation and blessing for the future