Undawn
I'm just your average day readaholic but I swear Webnovel is gonna make me lose it
Writing
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Read books
and you need to pay attention to what you spell, now then let us enjoy this "bad writing"
I'm SORRY but the guy you want us to fight just sent a man FLYING WITH A PUNCH how about you go fight them
L+Ratio+Skill Issue Bozo
Listen if we have to deal with Christopher Columbus I request he suffers a bit,or a lot, because his list of war crimes are very....
I KNEW IT
oh my God is fockin Abraham
You know as a theory man myself I can't help but scream from this last line *Inhales Intensely*
So training ark for ryou Haki then
Gaia?
Ok so going off of who the author is this is the last thing you are gonna do (I think this will be another Ainsley situation)
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Ok so I'm writing this from chapter 5Writing Quality: It's sadly very poor and I can barely get through a single sentence without having to think hard on what you wanted to insinuate. There are many errors where there are words that were used in the wrong context or were meant to be something else entirely.Story Development: It's a great premise and I find that the story is fairly interesting but my one gripe was the lack of history of the MCs previous world before it was blown up. We are basically thrown in the middle( or end) of what should be an extremely tense battle that feels more like a simple cakewalk.Character Design: Your character design is pretty good and but you may need a few more detail.Overall I think that you may want to revisit these older chapters because they are by far an annnoyance to read through causally for most and can lose you some potential readers on the first or second chapters.