Dropped it on Webnovel, it's still going on Royal Road

Valid criticism though!

It's the effect of his talent. He won't be able to change however he please.

Single female lead

Pherhaps😉

Potential for a good face slapping story, if done correctly! The mc is overpowered af, and the story can play on how his emotions and mind develop, making it more interesting. Worth a read.

You're gonna need to pace it differently, introduce higher dimensions or new restrictions to be able to write more. At this rate, in at most 100 chapters, no new ideas will fit into this story, forcing you to discard it. Valid story and system though. Keep it up!

It is far from being the best, yet also far from being the worst thing on this platform. I'm new to this, so although it won't be amazing, I hope you might give it a shot!

Overall a fun, entertaining novel, however it has its pros and cons. Pros: Interesting system, world characters and development. Cons: writing cuality, inaccurate information at times, ilogical reasoning.

This editor is a joke