hi author does aint the mc know he is in mlp

boo this man boooo

oh boy where you right also when you read this i have reach chapter 60 and made a review i want to say that the rating i gave is unbiased on my feelings however the review is i am going to keep reading to see if my feeling change though i also hope you keep up the good work for the readers that actually love your story and not let my review disturb you

anyone reading this read till the end its not that i hate the novel but that it aint all that special i enjoyed reading it ........no i am not gonna lie i did not like reading it the concept is good but the execution was meh when i realize that the story came from webnovel i just copyed and paste the review i had and but it here. but i can give the author a bit lea way since this might be their first novel in that case i cannot completely rate a novice to the rest of the novels i have read. i have read 50 chapters now so i can give a general review on this novel and all i have to say its dog water now hear me out the writing quality is 5/5, the characters 3/5, the world 5/5, the mc 3/5. now first of all it is extremely slow pace if you are willing to wait over 50 chapters to get over day one well then you can keep on reading but i expect day 2 to be even longer. Secondly the mc the guy that goes through many game resets is completely a idiot lets say you experience the same day over and over again would aint you be alarm if in one of those reset something unexpected happen that did not happen in any of the repeats in this regards the mc is alarm but not in the way you expect he realize the heroine are more human because theyn are going off script does he ask if they became sentient nooooo he rolls with it and became the BF for a support character that was suppose to sleep with the mc of the eroge and don't get me started on the heroines all in all the novel is a 3/5 but with my personal feeling its a 1/5 the author had a good concept but they terrible executed it resulting in one of those chinse novel about the heroines are able to read the mc's heart in fact thats exactly what this novel is

this is getting annoying i get that he has gone through it many times but he need to stop commenting on things that will happen in the future. i came here to read about a charater gaining sentience but what i am reading is a guide to the eroge like i don't need this information fam

yh it just frustrate me from time to time that authors not use something different and unique luckly this one does thank god

that could be interesting like how the six eyes work in jjk

true however those are example of knowledge based abilities the sharingan is just eyes that let you do everything

i aint gonna lie to you the amount sharingain fanfic out there, it created it own genre in fact do you have any other idea for overpowered abilities other than that

sorry bout that i just read a few more chapter turns out the MC is still 10 years old i though he was a bit older thats why

all in all even though he did not take the evil route this drama was pretty good

bruh i really expected better author i really expected better what was the point of him facing his consequences if it not gonna come. the moment i read he got outed i was thinking he night join the evil side of the series which would be the first fanfic of dxd where the mc is truely evil but now this

wait if rias does not have a peerage then what happen to koneko, akeno, jasper and kiba whenever they join her peerage they where either about to die or be killed

rem and ram ??

i can't wait then i am really invested

how about a power from one of the pathways in Lord of the Mysteries i forgot pathway but i think its either white tower, hermit or knowledge king

go read a naruto fanfic if you want that

alright first of all where did you eve get the documents to sign up for a college like your birth certificate and other secondly how the hell does a college willing take in a untrain student it might be a situation similar to jaune so i wont complain but still

do you even have any documents

i can understand their existment but he is basically a normal citizen going to a elite solider academy with people who have been training since middle school