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trayad70

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2020-10-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • trayad70
    trayad701mth
    Posted

    This book has a great storyline and interesting characters. At first I wasntā€™t for the trupple, but it grew on me. What hasnā€™t grown on me is the amount of wasted words the author utilizes in their efforts of creating visual descriptions of the scenery and characters. Literally, in most chapters, the 1st few pages are repetitive descriptions of the ā€˜lush estateā€™ or ā€˜beauty of the mls. If they have to provide a detailed reminder every chapter of the aesthetic prowess of the characters & backdrop, do it in 1-2 paragraphs per chapter rather than repeating yourself multiple times wasting multiple pages of each chapter. A proofreader is definitely needed.

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    The Ger's Contract Marriage [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Ellie_Ethereal
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701mth
    Commented

    The author literally described and repeated the same scenerio 5 different times in not so different 5 different waysā€¦ this book has a good storyline but needs a serious edit.

    Decades of silence and numbness seemed to unravel in the face of this near lifeless body.
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    The Ger's Contract Marriage [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Ellie_Ethereal
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701mth
    Commented

    Omgā€¦ how many times are their hair, eyes & aura going to be described??? We got a pretty good grasp of that early, early on in the book.

    As Xu Feng sat mostly admiring Xuan Yang's scholarly aura, he couldn't help but marvel at the man's appearance. Xuan Yang had a certain air of refinement about him, with his sleek, black hair neatly tied back and his dark eyes scanning the pages of the book in front of him.Ā 
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    The Ger's Contract Marriage [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Ellie_Ethereal
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad7011mth
    Commented

    They are doing way too much. This is dumbšŸ‘Ž

    Ch 593 Chapter 586 - He Fucked Up
    altalt
    The Alpha's Hidden Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· DrAxy66
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad7011mth
    Commented

    Agreedā€¦. This does not make sense!

    "I'll do whatever it takes to be with you."
    altalt
    The Kingā€™s Pet
    LGBT+ Ā· RoseNesha
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    One of the BEST stories Iā€™ve read since becoming BLNovel fan! Fantastic! No o guess Iā€™l read your next novel!

    Ch 617 Final Final Chapter
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    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Iā€™m getting a little suspicious Kwang. He seems to know way too much about everyone šŸ¤”šŸ¤«šŸ«£

    Ch 135 He Is Not The Killer
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    Captured By The Cold Detective (BL)
    LGBT+ Ā· delanasiwarka
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    AWwww S*#z!

    Ch 511 "Did you smoke?"
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    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Han Han such a sly butth@@@ but u gotta luv him!šŸ˜†

    'Checkmate,' said Zi Han internally.
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    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Why are the privelage chapters so expensive?

    Ch 110 Lie Busted?!
    altalt
    Captured By The Cold Detective (BL)
    LGBT+ Ā· delanasiwarka
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    She is aggravating!!!

    Ch 266 Begging for more
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    The Wrong Mate
    LGBT+ Ā· WagS
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Iā€™m weakšŸ˜‚šŸ¤£šŸ˜…

    They soon realised that he had no recollection of who he was or where he was from but he absolutely remembered he had a wife. He didn't know who or where his wife was but he was adamant that he had a wife.
    altalt
    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 25 For Your Own Good
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    Captured By The Cold Detective (BL)
    LGBT+ Ā· delanasiwarka
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Just tell him Yi Chen so u can ave your baby back!

    Ch 400 I apologize in advance
    altalt
    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Posted

    I was pleasantly surprised with this book. I usually avoid shorter novels because I love the long drawn out drama but this was just right!

    altalt
    Family Ties
    LGBT+ Ā· Lisa Gray
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Look at this dude trying to be all romantic! Makes me feel super bad for riding steadfast on the Clyde & Rylie train.šŸ„ŗ

    Ch 438 Chapter 435 - For You :)
    altalt
    The Alpha's Hidden Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· DrAxy66
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Just luv luv luv them!!! So Iā€™m assuming, hoping, praying that the separation in the future is fake!!!šŸ™

    Ch 374 Angel Wings for an angelic fiance
    altalt
    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
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  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 372 Do you swear servitude to the Bloodgarde till death....,"
    altalt
    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Dang! I feel like Iā€™ in am in a r Kelly song! Everybody got full a@@ bodies in their closets!

    Ch 431 Chapter 428 - The Painter
    altalt
    The Alpha's Hidden Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· DrAxy66
    detail
  • trayad70
    trayad701yr
    Commented

    Chen Chen letting Han Han know what heā€™s missing! ā˜ŗļøšŸ¤£

    Ch 370 Second chances
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    The Assassin's Enemy Lover
    LGBT+ Ā· Andru_9788
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