Xeno_Xavier
What is left when you take the stuffing out of the turkey, the side quests out of a game or the smut out of a fanfic, are you still left satisfied?
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or boys?!?!? she could always charm boys!!!!
not really how blindness works but lets say someone is born with no eyes. they would simply dream in sounds and sutch.
depends on when they went blind. how. and the type of blindness
is she her dads lover?!?!?!
bro got shot and started craking jokes in his head. peak game and lock in this is insanity.
idk but now that you mention it he does look like that mf
respect for taking your time to read my suggestions I expect great things from you author.
I really love the charecterization of Nero and the mc their comody really brings life to the story but I wish you would give us some pov's from normal soldiers so we can get a more level understanding of the story aswell as being an incredible way to add some comedic moments, I wish the rhino had a bit more of a place in the story because at this point he feels kinda like a random throw in with no nieche adding nothing but another possible charecter for readers to remember wich isn't bad per say now since we have so little but will mess with the story once it has grown. I do really enjoy the three generals of the army and how their personalities clash while being so close.
whenever I hear or read die hard I can only think back to that one rick and morty episode