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JdCreates

JdCreates

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Just a guy starting to writing books and novels for fun. Enjoy!

2020-10-13 JoinedUnited States
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates11d
    Commented

    Keep it going! It just got better!

    Ch 4 Angel
    The Multiversus
    Action · Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1mth
    Replied to JdCreates

    Also nice grammar changes, you've definitely made this more professional, and it's a lot better to read!

    Ch 3 Cosmos
    The Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1mth
    Commented

    MAN ACTUALLY REWROTE THE WHOLE BOOK! RIP THE MEMES BUT LIKE I SAID ALL THOSE YEARS AGO, KEEP GOING! KEEP COOKING!

    Ch 3 Cosmos
    The Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1yr
    Commented

    Keep going!

    Ch 7 Tournament
    The Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1yr
    Commented

    He continued the legendary book! It’s a dub!

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    The Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1yr
    Commented

    🤣🤣🤣🤣

    Narrator: Shaggy became mad, mad to the point the omniverse started shaking. Shaggy used 10% of his power. The sky of the Omniverse filled with black and red darkness. Shaggy had a devilish aura that defied all logic. Shaggy rushed at the 6 mysterious people so fast he moved beyond the concept of time. None of the mysterious beings couldn't see him from how fast he was moving. Before they knew it everything in existence was destroyed. Shaggy destroyed the Omniverse. He destroyed the infinite layered transcendental abstract world which was sealed away for eternity. Shaggy was standing there sad staring into the darkness alone. At the time Shaggy wasn't in existence at the moment.
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates1yr
    Posted

    The fact that this is even real is actually incredible. Obviously there are many grammar flaws and such, but you’re getting a five out of five for effort on this meme. Don’t stop. Ever.

    The Multiversus
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates2yr
    Replied to Miracle_Diala

    Thanks you for responding and sharing feedback, I can assure you that the latter chapters are a major improvement, as earlier chapters were actually done two years ago, compared to the current chapters at around 190 as of Jan 2022. I plan to revise them once the series is complete. Once against, thanks for the feedback!

    Powers Against The World
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates2yr
    Replied to CylicFrost

    Appreciate the comments, I hope you note the improvement of chapters over the latter bits of the books. :)

    Powers Against The World
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates2yr
    Replied to Jennyoniichan

    I'll see if I'm interested.

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Powers Against The World
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Commented

    Playing on the playstation to the Xbox be like

    Ch 3 First Step
    Ace Combat System
    War · CylicFrost
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Replied to JdCreates

    Ps8*

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Ace Combat System
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Posted

    I hope this book doesn't let me down. I see the potential, but fixing grammar errors and such will make it better. Good luck with the writing, and I hope it delievers.

    Ace Combat System
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Commented

    Lemme get da **8. But in all seriousness, interesting start and with editing it will good!

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Ace Combat System
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Posted

    Book is great, has plenty of variety and overall has a good plot. Keep it up! I only have a few complaints, but they are minor and don't ruin the book.

    Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Replied to R_F_T_S

    Yeah, I could have done better I will admit, but glad to see that its overall enjoyable. Thanks for the response!

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    Book One: Overcoming The Power Within
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Replied to Melik_David

    Thank you for the feedback, I plan for the books to get deeper as it progress and the character's plot development to become more clear. If you haven't already and you are interested, consider adding it to your collection and share it with others if you like. I appreciate the review!

    Book One: Overcoming The Power Within
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Posted

    First several chapters are pretty good, I enjoy the plot and hope for the story to excel. I'm glad that there are plenty of chapters to read and continue which I'll do during my free time. I'm glad I was able to find this. I wish this person luck.

    The Legendary Tales of Indra
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Replied to devilDestroyer22

    Thank you for the review. I am constantly editing so hopefully I fix them as soon as possible. If you haven't already and if you like you can go ahead and add it to your collection to see new chapters and share it with others!

    Book One: Overcoming The Power Within
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  • JdCreates
    JdCreates3yr
    Replied to Krizzy_By

    Well don’t cause I plan for it to get better from here.

    Book One: Overcoming The Power Within
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