Really good so far, just hope it's not dropped when the contest is over. Seems to happen a lot these days. If the quality stays up I would even be fine with once a week updates.

how long tell he meet the blue dragon that was throwing him the looks. Family man need a family

thanks for the chap, keep it up!

thanks, nice to have you back, looking forward to the chaps!

This is so interesting, From the minute I read the first sentence tell I caught up, my eyes never left the screen. I find that after taking sociology and psychology classes that there is nothing more interesting than the human brain. I love that the author is super straight forward and doesn't give it to us sugarcoated. We get the details that make a good dark novel. Would highly recommend for anyone who likes dark novels or that find human actions with dark behavior(morals/ideals) interesting.

Truuuueee

Yeahh… take a stand

I like the premise but you dragged out the build up to the party fro way too long. It shouldn't take 20 chapters to finally get to the party. The awakening was dragged out way too long, and every once an in a while you go on a tangent about his past thats not needed.

Its dropped, dont even start to read it or you will be extremely dissatisfied. It has an amazing start that will hook you then he dropped it for another novel that he isn't even writing much.

no

another fire nation, definitely if azula is the love interest

azula

I don't know if you did it on purpose, but I like the life and death aspect at the end. When someone dies someone is also born, coo to see his first child is announced as his grandpa dies.

couple chapters ago, you said, " Momo was walking with a "limp" and mom's mom smiled at her with a knowing look. I assumed that she knew they did it?