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Larry_Butler

Larry_Butler

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2020-09-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler7mth
    Posted

    Very slow start. Story doesn't flow well. Wording is cringe and awkward.

    Reincarnated With The Undefeated System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler11mth
    Commented

    I would have said make the family debt go away then maybe I won't tell everyone. Then I would put a hold on the lawyer just in case it worked

    "I do not care. You are on your own for the stupid things you did. You are not allowed to say that I am your cousin or that you know me in front of others. I just started here and have a bright future, and will not be destroyed like you were," Han Hao said, glaring at Han Sen.
    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler1yr
    Commented

    Jumping around in the story way too much. The storyline is getting too erratic and hard to follow.

    Ch 60 60. Crazy Bitch (NO NTR Don't Be Worried Read Till End)
    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler1yr
    Commented

    very true

    "Ever since we are born, we are labeled to do something. We grow up, go to kindergarten, and then go to elementary school, middle school, high school. After that, we are told to go to university where we think our life would get better once we graduate, but it doesn't. Even after we graduate, we have to look for jobs everywhere, and once we get a job, our life as a slave begins. It doesn't matter what job you get at what post; even if you are the boss, you are a slave to work. We spend half of our lives studying, and the rest of our life working. There is no shortcut to success. That's why, we should live our life to the fullest whenever we get time," Rudy asserted in a solemn voice.
    Esper Harem in the Apocalypse
    Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    Good story so far. I do not like you abandoning a major character like Rosie.

    Ch 148 Amethyst Hotel and Shane Thompson Report
    The Invincible Full-Moon System
    Fantasy · Mrboogey13
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    Way too long and boring fight. This is getting ridiculous. Just end the fight.

    Ch 2019 Body
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    too long and drawn out

    Ch 2017 Crown Of Roses
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    explaining too much or getting too complicated makes a dull book

    Ch 47 Abyssal Conqueror Record
    The Demon Monarch System
    Fantasy · Syphiinz
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Posted

    I wasn't sure in the beginning but it turned out great. It is a very refreshing read I would recommend to anyone. My only complaint is waiting for chapters.

    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    I thought it was ice. last ability used I guess.

    Ability: Level 7 void
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    you have done very good. no one should need an excuse.

    Ch 61 Jinxed
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    well we didn't see Vorden at least that is different

    "I have a confession to make. This exam was only a formality and wasn't really even necessary. I will give you a watch right now that you must have on you at all times. This watch can analyze your entire body and assess your power level through the new deep learning military technology. It will also analyze your equipment and add that to your power levels. However, you need to understand that power levels aren't everything. They don't consider a person's ability type, fighting techniques, or fighting experience, so it isn't that uncommon for lower power levels to win against higher power levels. This watch will also be used as a tracking device in order to monitor your locations. Don't worry, the tracking device will only activate under special circumstances or when the watch senses you are out of your dorms past curfew or dead."
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Larry_Butler
    Larry_Butler2yr
    Commented

    why did they only feel cia die then. I'm sure Quinn turned a few of the 50 at least.

    There were many gravely injured that could no longer battle, but out of the two hundred, they had only lost fifty or so. Which was far fewer than than the other side.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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