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I hope you are better, I like how you are intertwining the stories and how they collide with Rosalia's daily life, it is incredible how you narrate I cannot stop reading and I am left wanting to know more about all those characters that you are creating. I'm curious about the cursed doll, will it be Rosalia's magical pet? 😂 or just something to scare her with, plus I like the dynamic of her and Cass. Get well soon and take care!
I loved the chapter, it offered good times and at the end an unexpected twist that leaves you totally puzzled, I'll be waiting for the next chapter, I wonder what Rosa will do, will he defend him or will he let his father take him away? You can love, I hope you get out of this!
It hurts me to read Rosa's memories and at the same time they fascinate me how you narrate them, Rosa's past and present hurts me both, she licks her own wounds. They had their own fights but I want them to experience a bit of what their daughter or granddaughter felt. I know that it is ugly to wish for something bad to happen to her but my heart hurts so much when I read her perspectives. I love the story and how you make us experience the feelings of the characters and how wonderful each of them are.
And with regard to romance, do not worry, I know you will reach a solution, romance does not necessarily have to be very cheesy, I will also look forward to romance if it happens 😂🙋♀️
The title caught my attention and I found it interesting, then I read the story, I liked it but there are sudden jumps in the history of events that happen very quickly (I think that is what the previous comments refer to when they say that it is very confusing, really I'm not very sure, in short it seems very rushed). But I like the general idea that you have an empowered and villainous woman, not so villainous, however it makes me curious as to how you will make her a villain and in what direction the plot goes. As I said before and I repeat I like it, I will be anxiously waiting for the updates, you have great potential, I like your ideas and the characters. Take the time you want, because what really matters is that you feel satisfied with what you write and it does not matter what changes the story undergoes or if you delete it, as long as you come back. We will be waiting for you and have fun this holidays!
I honestly thought that it would be another of the many clichéd stories I read but how wrong I was. God I love the background of the story and as the protagonist tries to get ahead despite all the things that happened, I am fascinated by the characters and their pasts And as they evolve, I was amazed at how you write and how you progress in your story, I really love how you write and as this story continues to advance, I am happy to have come across this gem of a novel. Thank you very much and I will keep waiting for updates 💕