Although I don't write, personally I think this whole build up could have been done better. The Mc seems lacking in actually character development for example personality wise he seems stuck up, with no feelings towards others and mean he tries to come up with an excuse for his lack of empathy toelwards curses. He doesn't really communicate nor go out out of his way to actually get to know his class mates. The pacing is also going way to fast, he lacked proper motivation from day one. He hasn't really contemplated his end goal. Outside of all this and some other things the story is fine, just take your time to develop the story. Don't worry about keeping it honed towards a certain direction and consider the possible butterfly affects his action will have on others and the world.

yeah thats also what was stated during their meeting

Overall it is a great story with little to no grammatical mistakes. However, the pov of Cane is boring. He's too perfect with no actual flaws which hampers the story in the long run. It would have been much more interesting actual watching him climb the latter towards being an overlord while building his empire. Theirs also the relationship development area...it's kinda lacking especially when hes first introduced into the story. The jabs he thrown at lucifer were unnecessary and overplayed. In general he is a gary sue type character.... Though this is just my opinion after reading it.

I think hes getting them its just to many to actually keep count of while also continuing the story right now. If I had to give a guess of how many probably enough to improve all his skills by a level or two with like 20 mistakes each.

I would honestly say an evil super sayian transformation brings out the inate desire for destruction and power nothing else.

This is hilarious 😂

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Yeah...No agree to disagree.

It was a good chapter...Just not for me, the whole dialog part made it hard to keep focus..

Technically they arent fictional, there all real. It's just that the people who get a glimpse of said reality while in their own reality perceive it to be a dream of their own creation.

I really wanna see the baby momma tiamat

Your right because the orginal author said that females in that race don't exist and King cold had him al alone. This means that they are both male and female.

B.S it was the other way around Zaraki was the one who unconsciously lowered their strength as he was in awe of the first kenpachi's strength. He never wanted the battle to end, but Captain unahonna couldn't keep up, though she won in the end she understood that infact she was not Zaraki's opponent. The conclusion of the battled allowed her to realize what had happened. This caused her to feel as though she had committed an forgivable sin, which is the self imposed restrictions of Zaraki.

Why isnt the mc taking advantage of his prior knowledge, train till hes on the brink of death and bam power up- do it again and again again....

Words of endearment like dear or honey would be better to further show their connection/bond...Plus it's very unusual for a married couple to call each other by their names constantly... Also its not cultivation its training because cultivation entells the practice of inner strength. Which spiritual energy isnt... Evil spirits can be a little confusing so calling them hollows is better especially since they both have lived in the soul society for countless years,which will reinforce the labeling of hollows. The only ones who call them evil spirits are humans.

I read this as him having 3 gas lighting techniques lol

Sure is.

The mc randomly knows a lot of stuff that he hasn't been shown at all. Its best to act like the reader knows absolutely nothing when writing stories like this, otherwise it just becomes a question of when and how does he even know that.