I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style. While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book. "Isaac likes to sing. he enjoys it. Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't. Alice likes her elder brother." Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences

this..somehow doesn't feel like a vrmmo anymore

author-san is doing such a great job so far, I'm a late reader but.. keep it up!

my thoughts exactly. would be better if author changes the name to something like "double/two swords mastery"

I feel like half the comments don't read the chapters .. why do y'all keep asking the same question over and over again when the author clearly explained it multiple times???

Good story so far, but I've noticed that from the first chapter the amount of mistakes in using "to" and "too" as well as "there" and "their" is quite a lot. Its really annoying to read and breaks the flow, hope you get an editer or fix before uploading

So good so far author! Keep it up

Good stuff so far author!

'ITS ALIIIIIVVEEE'

There are so many typos in this chapter, there usually are one or two but this one is straight up filled. Please fix

Elena strikes me like someone who's on her period 24/7. I don't mean this in a bad way though, its so cute how her expression and mood keeps on changing lmao

I'm really loving this so far, but I have a huge issue with the stats. Idk maybe later on having stats in the thousands is the normal, but I generally prefer starting from stats of "1" or "10" max, it just looks much neater

Seems promising so far

The depth in this is so much that it feels more like an isekai than a vrmmo Idk if i completely like this or not but the story is just superb. I'm a late reader but I hope the story doesn't flop from here and on

Amazing story so far, but there is one thing that has been bugging me. The use of 'to' and 'too'. Please fix them :)

Okay so the story build up has been PHENOMENAL so far. Keep it up!