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Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthReplied to Ashim_beast- Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthCommented
here we see a mistake made by the author in writing since chapter 1. "Always telling and not showing"
Ai who was in the background screamed in panic not knowing what to do, she was too scared to act. - Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthReplied to Kanata_Tomokui
some plot stories of marvel is stúpid, so what do you expect?
For these warriors at the height of ignorance, such a fact did not matter. They lacked caution which came with wisdom derived from experience. - Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthReplied to scarletking001
it gets kinda worse in the part when he is with makima(for me atleast), meaning a few chapters later. I'm pretty sure you already reach that part. The date is bad and his inner monologues is still irritating, that's why I stopped reading this for a while until now. tell me what you think about the date and the whole makima arc.
'No! Calm down,' Adam still had many thoughts in his head, it was bad enough that he had done that once but not again. - Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthReplied to scarletking001
yep, the author doesn't care about grammar suggestions
'No! Calm down,' Adam still had many thoughts in his head, it was bad enough that he had done that once but not again. - Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthCommented
doubt? why doubt? isn't it should be curious or clueless?
"MY. LADY?" Cocytus spoke, doubt evident in his tone. The NPCs in the office were alarmed at my sudden actions. - Fck_You_Web_Novel7mthCommented
pretty villainous, will*add a comma, the sentence is confusing without it.
Since my actions are also pretty villainous will some sort of magical plot armour make the goody two-shoes heroes to suddenly defeat me? - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
no
A/N: just to clear this is not a harem, Athena Could possibly be a second wife and that's it. So do you guys want Athena as the second wife? - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
you should stockpiles chapters and not post immediately after writing one or else you will burn yourself out
*Writing these chapters was tough…. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthReplied to FoolishSociopath
yep. the thing that can wipe a universe with just a thought
Please comment on some of the villains you would like to see or concepts you would like explored in the story. Such as objects, pantheons, events etc. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
celestials but i think they are for later stages considering their power level also their creator, the one eyed being that i forgot its name
Please comment on some of the villains you would like to see or concepts you would like explored in the story. Such as objects, pantheons, events etc. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
shalltear: pls. have a seat
Ultimately, I managed to convince her that punishments were not necessary as she had not done anything wrong yet. Upon hearing this she promised to become better than her counterpart version while being slightly disappointed that she would not be punished. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
"the pieces of the puzzle is coming together."and the person herself don't have any idea what in the f is going on.
But Albedo and Demiurge could already see glimpses of the required path they had to take to make their vision a reality. Lady White's actions as well as the multiple plans they had thought up after reading the comics were slowly coming together as pieces of a larger puzzle. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
where pic
Gwen was confused for a moment before looking down and realizing that he'd changed her clothes, she was now wearing a figure-hugging black dress that accentuated her curves perfectly. It left her shoulders bare while the dress had two straps extending over her arms just below her shoulders to hold it in place. It went down to the middle of her thighs before it ended, leaving her milky thighs and legs completely bare. Lastly, she was wearing strappy high heels that had thin straps wrapping around her ankles that went up to her calves. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
the yandere is strong in this one 💀☠️
The Albedo of that universe did nothing to avenge her beloved and bring her back to life but meekly and subserviently served that skeleton. Such a stain could not be allowed to exist. - Fck_You_Web_Novel8mthCommented
this is a stolen work.this guy stole the story from the original owner. the original story name is "marvel: im a symbiote".don't read this and spread the news.
"Avada Kedavra!" A man screamed as a jet of green light left the wand in his hand.