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Mister_Rals2mthCommentedI don't know why authors in fanfics like to drag the fights against Enel, their MCs can easily win the fights or kill him, but always make Enel stronger or the MC play with him, it's frustrating. Luffy defeat him with jus a few punches, and the MCs of fanfics have haki and are a lot stronger, but make Enel resist those hits like it was Luffy the one fighting him, the guy never trained his body, he just sit there all day being stupid. They give him to much "screen" time. And always make the Island a mess, it's not a big land to take that much damage. By the way, i'm not saying that this fanfic it's bad, it's just my personal preference, i don't like Enel as a person (but for the original manga/anime was a great villain and saga), that is why i always skip the fights against the Eminem wanna be. 🤷♂️
Ch 169 Chapter 169 - Skypiea 05.- Mister_Rals3mthCommented
I'm the only one that skip full/part of chapters? Because of the chinesse style of repeating the same thing many times with different words. I'm not gonna lie, this fanfic it's really good, but that it's the only thing that i don't like (8/10). ♥️♥️
Ch 187 Chapter 186 Fleet Admiral Marine, Kizaru - Mister_Rals4mthCommented
Man, one piece it's always crazy jajajaja so everything it's great, keep going!!
AN: Was that too crazy? - Mister_Rals5mthCommented
Everything has been great man!! The only thing that need to be better it's the quantity of chapters, i believe that 100 chapters a Day it's the right number for me 🤔👍♥️😆
Therefore, if possible, I'd appreciate some reviews right here or in the paragraphs or comments, about what you think of Devas and the story in general so far, your opinion. - Mister_Rals6mthCommented
Manas from tensura?
A/N: To be honest, Miku's endgame lies in (none other than) a certain concept found in a certain light novel (which has a certain interesting character). That was how I envisioned her from her creation. I needed an AI and the first thing I thought of is Miku, so why not? - Mister_Rals6mthCommentedCh 179 Chapter 179 : Teaching And Learning 3 (Rewrite)
- Mister_Rals7mthReplied to Mister_RalsCh 161 Chapter 161 : Jonin Test (Rewrite)
- Mister_Rals7mthCommentedCh 161 Chapter 161 : Jonin Test (Rewrite)
- Mister_Rals7mthCommented
Wendigo?
The creature was humanoid. But that was all it was. It certainly wasn't human. Its skin was gray and leathery. Its limbs were long and spindly. The creature was hanging on a tree like a strange fusion of spider and monkey with its arms. - Mister_Rals7mthCommentedCh 238 Chapter 238: The Tournament par 4
- Mister_Rals9mthReplied to TheMainPlagiaris
Luffy gear 5 have only 1 ability (I think): imagination (reality manipulation), and him and joyboy are goofy in nature, that's why it's manifest in a cartonish way. So basically OP.
'Why Luffy's Gomu Gomu no Mi was taking so long?' He asks himself 'Protagonist power? Did it have some hidden crazy potential? Whatever, I will copy during his training arc...' - Mister_Rals9mthCommentedCh 113 Steve Chapter 112
- Mister_Rals9mthCommented
I'm sorry man, but I have to skip a lot since the demons show up, it's like hard and boring to read for me. I can't wait for this to end and see the mc traveling to other places. The idea was good, but you just focus to much in it and the history feels like don't move foward. Don't get me wrong, is really well writen and had been a pleasure to read since the beginning, my problem it's just this arc. I just needed to vent a little xD
Ch 151 Lilith alarmed - Mister_Rals10mthReplied to DongLongCh 109 Chapter 109: Meeting A God.
- Mister_Rals10mthCommentedCh 142 Guess the game
- Mister_Rals1yrPosted
The bad: the only bad thing is that now we have to pay for reeding some of the chapters, and that could be a little dangerous because it's kind of a fanfic. (but i'm not sure, so if i'm wrong everything is great) The good: everything else... Great quality, story and world background, it's really awesome.
- Mister_Rals1yrCommented
It's a good fic, but waiting a week for this kind of chapters (so short) it's really frustrating 😩
Wonder Woman would soon arrive at Shady Sands, what will she do? I guess we shall wait and see. - Mister_Rals2yrCommented
It's feels smoother to read, easier, but is a bit difficult to notice because it has a great quality since the beginning.
[A/N: I bought premium Grammarly for a month to try it. Tell me if you feel any difference in punctuation and sentences compared to the last chapter.]