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mmm let's see,,,,, I guess this vent will be very personal,,, first of all I don't like the personality or the attitude at all and everything that surrounds the mc (unpleasant, meaningless, without originality although well you can't either to ask a lot from a dxd fic), and secondly I would say that it is more of an error ,,,"you are telling me that Rias is level 119 considering that the maximum that can be reached is 999 and in fact the devil race only she can reach 500 which is even more stupid since even though Rias is "a high class devil" her true power is only low class, (I know she is said to have a super high demon power but number 1 is not He knows how to use his power and when he uses it he wastes a lot of energy and his only powerful attack is to shoot energy of destruction straight and without control "which can be dodged very easily" (by the way I'm not a Rias hater nor do I hate her,,, but it has been seen in the anime and even more so in the novel how pathetically weak Rias is at the beginning and MUCH more at delente in history,,, in fact it began to make useful I think until the arc of the ExE,,) therefore I would have put it a 40 or at most a 50 and that is already a lot,,,, well I'll leave this here already I think I'm going to look like a freak if I continue hahaha and it's already a lot of text I guess I'm going to read this until chapter 20 if something catches my attention and if it does, I'll change the review bye (translator)
mmmmm, it's not for me,,,,, a mc too much with a "japanese" theme, you know,,,, submissive,,, he lets himself be stepped on or hit by women etc...,, (a beta mc basically) and how I could not miss the decisions and forced moments,,, also despite the fact that the story does not take place in the canon time,,, the mc is "strangely" with the same nonsense that bell was in the canon,,, feels like a copy and paste,,,in boring definition(translator)
a fic a bit zzzz๐ด,,,,,, boring as hell,,,,,,, a copy and paste of the canon,,,,, not even a simple change,,,, agreed with the grammar,, ,, the absurd decisions of the mc,,, and other things (that honestly makes me lazy to say) made this fic for ME bland, boring and a waste of time,,,," seriously friend, at least try to change something of the canon ๐๐ " (translator)
if I had to describe it it would be "boring",,,,,, literally it's damnachi,, the only difference would be bell's unique taste for elves,,, and riveria's infatuation at the beginning of the story,,,,, the same event,,,, the same skills just changing the name and adding a little extra,,,,,,, the same personality of the mc,,,, the same events only adding riveria in the mix,,,,, honestly for this I watch the anime better (translator)
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