Joswilaney
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Joswilaney4dReplied to DylanUhhread a real book, by Tolkien, Jordan, or Goodkind... learn what appropriate levels of detail looks like
Though not an inch over 5'7", she had a presence that captivated the world, one larger than even Leonel himself believed he had.- Joswilaney4dReplied to Jorah26252
it's called 'plot armor hamfists a 180⁰ shift in MC's mentality and attitude' which is just lazy writing
Just how many instances of trial, error and failure were there in the evolution of a species? Too many to count. But something like being teleported into a new sub-dimension and having quests to clear sounded too phony. Leonel would die before believing this wasn't created by someone. And, he also had a feeling that said someone wouldn't expect its new batch of evolutionaries to have technology capable of doing such a thing. - Joswilaney4dReplied to DylanUhh
it's Not logic.... it's emotion. duh
'I hope that you'll show me your true self one day.' He thought to himself silently. - Joswilaney4dReplied to
it's called plot armor explains sudden & inorganic 180⁰ shift in MC's mentality and attitude....#lazywriting , he didn't need to suddenly be so on board with everything. makes him come across as naive and gullible
Just how many instances of trial, error and failure were there in the evolution of a species? Too many to count. But something like being teleported into a new sub-dimension and having quests to clear sounded too phony. Leonel would die before believing this wasn't created by someone. And, he also had a feeling that said someone wouldn't expect its new batch of evolutionaries to have technology capable of doing such a thing. - Joswilaney4dReplied to Raion_Heart
my comment was Very sarcastic
Maxwell's father, Ashton Garfield, is a Viscount of the Claymore Town. Most importantly, he is a powerful mage. Yeah, Magic exists in this world. That's why I said that this was a magical world. - Joswilaney17dCommentedCh 54 What Do You Think About The Current King?
- Joswilaney2mthCommentedCh 210 Chapter 203: Search
- Joswilaney2mthCommentedCh 208 Chapter 201: You Killed Theron And Nerio?!
- Joswilaney3mthCommentedCh 199 Chapter 192: Identity Revealed
- Joswilaney4mthCommentedCh 197 Chapter 190: Axel vs Kyrin, serious fight
- Joswilaney5mthReplied to RiM_MiRaCh 182 Chapter 176: Meeting the Boss
- Joswilaney6mthCommented
Germinal No.1's wettest dream
Coming in front of the scanning gate, this person unbuttoned their cape and showed their real face—he was shockingly half man, half machine. A very large area on his body had gone through mechanical modifications. Pipes and wires were hidden between the gaps of the armor, indication lights flashed, and only his right arm was human of his four limbs. There was no modification above his neck. He looked cold and handsome, especially his sharp eyes, which gave off an unwelcoming aura. - Joswilaney6mthCommented
I'm finally coming back for another read, I can't remember for the life of me if this thing ever gets used...? Anyone remember anything about this incomplete potion?
Unknown Drug: a semi-finished product of some drug, unknown effects. - Joswilaney6mthCommented
The man's name was [is*] Paladin ... repeated information, repeated information, redundant repeated information.
The man's name was Paladin and he was the one in charge of all technological advancement in the celestial plane. He is also the teacher of the scientist that Han killed before. - Joswilaney6mthReplied to ovrseer
you gotta take it up with the Author...I didn't choose the element lol
[Element: Fire]