"How did it go?" The agile voice of his best friend Damian was what he heard from the other end of the line, the bloody red eyes of his had dissipated, turning back to the crystal black eyes that made him look normal.
A tall figure suddenly emerged from the shadows with blazing fiery red eyes, the very same shadows which dreadfully haunted his soul and has forcefully become a part of him but he wanted it to haunt him so he could enjoy his revenge more better.
I like the name and cover.
the start gave off a different vibe, displaying her feisty nature.
World building check
Story development check...
Good character design esp for fl and others, check...
keep it up
Today was Monday, and one of the special days of the week for her, because an admirable business mogul, Mr. Fang was coming to class. Her sense of adulation and respect for Mr. Fang had long made it difficult for her to skip any of his classes.
"On what grounds do I have to keep giving out my blood to your son?!" A young beautiful woman snapped with a fierce gaze at the older woman standing before her.
Splendid novel.
Particularly love the synopsis.
For one to go through so much in life, having ur world turn upside down os pretty sad.
Love this kinds of female leads that rise up.
Kudos for your writing style author. Good one.