Joseph_Medley
Stay-at-home father of 8, lead Animator for Freedom Art Rebel Studios and owner of Kotas Studios, I have many projects running concurrently at the moment.
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General and Marshall are different... typucally
Right, just would be helpful for that to be specified or at least a little explanation on the grade system if they are tryin to gain English readers
Thought Yetta was a she? and which him was she talking to when she called two officers in?
At the officer acknowledged him using a random seemingly unconnected name, but assuming no connection bc he was on a plane? Got off and went straight to the gangs headquarters like a member would do?
Wouldn't let me submit a correction, so gotta do it in comments. @author Shotguns aren't exactly a long range weapon in any manner. They shoot shells that are typical either a slug (seemingly the type described here) or a spread. Altho Dragon's Breath are reeeeally fun
What does coconut juice have to do with anything?
Odd grade levels? He's a junior one? though it said he was a freshman...
A lot of references to seemingly random or nonsensical things with no elaboration or explanation.
What is "the fragrance law"? Already had to look up what a Sophon was
Thought he was gonna skip the tutoring job to do what he wanted?
Makes sense, and I agree, it's just severely annoying when it's done so often w no point of reference
I did stop reading it. Folks can't get better without help. I have received criticism of my work in the past. I accept it and utilize it or ignore it depending on the circumstances. Tryin to attain English readers, the author will likely face waaaay harsher critics w less benign intentions
Wolf Bat? Translation error?
Correction, you said .01% not even .1, very curious on the basis for that number regardless
His father told him to give the letters out to them on the battlefield. Specifically on the battlefield. I'm aware that the majority of warfare is not the battles, altho where u randomly got .1% is anyone's guess. His specific instructions would get his son or his relatives killed
If this mfer is the unparalleled wisdom of the entire Society, it's a wonder they have managed to do anything let alone recruit this many people repeatedly. Good sign these guys are about to be finished for good soon
And why only bring a few of yer personal guards if yer going into battle with an army 2.5 times the size of yers?! Bring all of em