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Joseph_Medley

Joseph_Medley

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Stay-at-home father of 8, lead Animator for Freedom Art Rebel Studios and owner of Kotas Studios, I have many projects running concurrently at the moment.

2020-09-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley12h
    Commented

    General and Marshall are different... typucally

    After they left, Marshall Loren jumped down from his chair, walked over to old Finoc, and explained in a low voice:
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    My Players Are So Fierce
    Games · Handsome dog Frank
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley13h
    Replied to elderpipebomb

    Right, just would be helpful for that to be specified or at least a little explanation on the grade system if they are tryin to gain English readers

    Not just him, the rest of the ninety-nine third-year students also left the cultivation room with lingering affections.
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    I Have A Cultivation World
    Eastern · Pure Nine Lotus Lamp
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    I'm not sure which is worse- the grammar/dialogue, the continuity/logic, or the characters

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: 'it's better to upset a villain than a woman'_1
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    Close body King of Soldiers
    Urban · Waning Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    Thought Yetta was a she? and which him was she talking to when she called two officers in?

    However, Yetta Astir did not give Basil Jaak a chance to argue. He turned around and called two policemen and specifically told him: "That guy is not only a prostitute, but also illegally possesses and distributes obscene books. Take him there. As for how long he should be detained, How much the fine will be depends on the regulations, so that no one will report me again to avenge themselves."
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    Close body King of Soldiers
    Urban · Waning Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    At the officer acknowledged him using a random seemingly unconnected name, but assuming no connection bc he was on a plane? Got off and went straight to the gangs headquarters like a member would do?

    Yetta Astir thought angrily. However, as a principled police officer, she had to grudgingly admit that Basil Jaak had indeed no connection to the Neurological Gang.
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    Close body King of Soldiers
    Urban · Waning Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    Wouldn't let me submit a correction, so gotta do it in comments. @author Shotguns aren't exactly a long range weapon in any manner. They shoot shells that are typical either a slug (seemingly the type described here) or a spread. Altho Dragon's Breath are reeeeally fun

    According to Milian, the shotgun used lead bullets filled with a special engineering powder called "Burning Gold", giving it considerable destructive power at medium to long distances. It was said that the Dwarven Earth Priests also had a special Dragon Breath Bullet that could incinerate all dark evils at close range.
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    My Players Are So Fierce
    Games · Handsome dog Frank
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    What does coconut juice have to do with anything?

    You're telling me she's a senior three student? Raised on coconut juice?
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    Three-Body: Climbing the Ladder of Technology Across the Universe
    Book&Literature · Technology creates gods
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    Odd grade levels? He's a junior one? though it said he was a freshman...

    Senior three? Why would they find me, a junior one student, to tutor?
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    Three-Body: Climbing the Ladder of Technology Across the Universe
    Book&Literature · Technology creates gods
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    A lot of references to seemingly random or nonsensical things with no elaboration or explanation.

    No traditional security guard blocking the way, no urban Dragon King face-slapping clichés.
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    Three-Body: Climbing the Ladder of Technology Across the Universe
    Book&Literature · Technology creates gods
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    What is "the fragrance law"? Already had to look up what a Sophon was

    Of course, this was not due to the "True Fragrance Law," but rather he sadly discovered that in this modern society where money is supreme, one can't do anything without it.
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    Three-Body: Climbing the Ladder of Technology Across the Universe
    Book&Literature · Technology creates gods
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1d
    Commented

    Thought he was gonna skip the tutoring job to do what he wanted?

    By five o'clock in the afternoon, Qin Ming arrived punctually at the tutoring address, even twenty minutes early.
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    Three-Body: Climbing the Ladder of Technology Across the Universe
    Book&Literature · Technology creates gods
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2d
    Commented

    Seeing the author acknowledge and welcome the corrections is comforting. and the tidbit of irl advice is a nice touch. The calls seem rather contestant nowadays.

    Ch 124 45. Handsome Murphy's Ambition: Crisis and Opportunity_3
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    Games · Handsome dog Frank
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley4d
    Replied to WuTang137

    Makes sense, and I agree, it's just severely annoying when it's done so often w no point of reference

    That's exactly why playboys can't make it past the third season - once they offend too many people, they're bound to hit a snag sooner or later.
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    King
    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Replied to Reader_mania32

    I did stop reading it. Folks can't get better without help. I have received criticism of my work in the past. I accept it and utilize it or ignore it depending on the circumstances. Tryin to attain English readers, the author will likely face waaaay harsher critics w less benign intentions

    Could two deer fighting cause the birds to hover indefinitely in the sky? It seemed only ignorant country bumpkins who hadn't received any military education might believe such a thing.
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    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Commented

    Wolf Bat? Translation error?

    "Wolf Poison! It must be them. You've made contact with them, haven't you? Is this Wolf Bat strength a 'war trophy' you obtained?"
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Replied to BluMagi

    Correction, you said .01% not even .1, very curious on the basis for that number regardless

    I've written letters to a few old friends of mine. If you come across them on the battlefield, deliver the letters. They should look out for you for my sake.
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    King
    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
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    His father told him to give the letters out to them on the battlefield. Specifically on the battlefield. I'm aware that the majority of warfare is not the battles, altho where u randomly got .1% is anyone's guess. His specific instructions would get his son or his relatives killed

    I've written letters to a few old friends of mine. If you come across them on the battlefield, deliver the letters. They should look out for you for my sake.
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    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Commented

    Whelp, guess this journey of suffering is over for me. gotta pay starting the next chapter snd there are far too many mediocre stories even to pay for this pne

    Ch 37 Chapter 36, Rebel Army Attack_1
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    King
    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Commented

    If this mfer is the unparalleled wisdom of the entire Society, it's a wonder they have managed to do anything let alone recruit this many people repeatedly. Good sign these guys are about to be finished for good soon

    His decision to personally participate was forced. He had become the High Priest of the Skeleton Society because of his unparalleled wisdom.
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    King
    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley5d
    Replied to Joseph_Medley

    And why only bring a few of yer personal guards if yer going into battle with an army 2.5 times the size of yers?! Bring all of em

    Rather than losing eight hundred "elites" simply, he would rather take a gamble. Biting his lip, the old man in the grey robe picked up his mage staff, stepped out of the forest with a few of his loyal guards.
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    Fantasy · New Sea Moon
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