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Joseph_Medley

Joseph_Medley

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2020-09-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    And moving slower being understandable for winning on a gane based on speed?

    But no one suspected Win A Girlfriend was cheating, and rightfully so. Cheats only allowed someone to speed up, and Han Sen's hands were actually slower than his opponent's.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    Speed and strength are very different

    At the same time, they realized how scary this thought genuinely was. The man was a legendary, professional player who had won numerous contests. Yet now, he was getting wrecked by a person they hadn't seen before. Truly, this new contender was frighteningly strong.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    Continuously reiterating the rules to the same things or retelling the same info in several chaptees is severely annoying

    Whoever hit a hundred lightspots first would be deemed the victor. You could either grab the lights near you, or the ones belonging to your opponent. Each lightspot was worth one point, and one hundred was needed to win.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Replied to Curium255

    I was thinking the same thing. Thats the way the entire book has been so why not

    In addition to his constant practice of the game, his legendary status was achieved in a variety of different ways. And aside from being naturally talented, he had a special hyper geno art that aided his play.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    When did his hand of god name change? this is like the 12th plus thing that has changed w no explanation or anything... kind of breaks up the flow for no reason

    "Evolver-class player 'Win A Girlfriend' is now the first player to complete super mode and has been granted the title 'Hand of God.'"
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    Good thing she has a strong mind or she would have fallen victim to a rapist apparently...

    "Big pervert! I knew you weren't nice. How dare you hypnotize me! If I could be put under such a spell, it wouldn't be one wrought by your weak mind." When Ji Yanran said that, she squeezed Han Sen's cheeks as hard as she could.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley1yr
    Commented

    Bee's usually have Queens, drones, and workers. Never heard of a bee King

    "The bee king did not eat the honey because it's saving it?" Han Sen's heart jumped as he imagined that. "Normally, kings eat the best stuff. If it isn't eating it itself, then perhaps it has babies to feed? Maybe there are child super creatures someplace within?"
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Commented

    the chalters are exceptionally short. also... goblins are typically humanoid. never in my life heard a centilede referred to as a goblin in any media

    Ch 410 Evil Goblins
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Commented

    so its not an overpriced 11 coin?

    Ch 324 Fighting the Queen
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Posted

    Not gonna give a score on my own thing, lol. Hello though everyone! I plan on continuing to add at least a new chapter every other day as long as possible. The end goal is at least 20 stories total, more if it gains attention. I was also wrong, I apparently have to leave a score.

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    Tales of Sol's Fury
    Fantasy · Joseph_Medley
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Posted

    The world could be a bit more explained but not horrible so far... will update later. It has a different setting than a lot of others so far.

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    I Picked up a Planet, Do You Want It, President?
    Sci-fi · Little Monster Jr
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Commented

    This is gonna end well lol

    Ch 43 Human traffickers in an abandoned factory (3)
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Replied to M_x_R_x_Y

    amused me too

    Ch 44 He Isn't Man Enough
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Joseph_Medley
    Joseph_Medley2yr
    Commented

    The book has been quite decent so far. I would recommend it. Given that the author isn't a native English-speaking individual it has been easy to follow still.

    Ch 44 He Isn't Man Enough
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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