Joseph_Medley
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Joseph_Medley3dReplied to Dot404Yeah... read it multiple times bubba. His description could use improvement
This achievement essentially secured their spots in the secondary-tier Daoist Academies. Within ten years they might have the chance to attempt the Foundation Establishment. If successful, they would become Gold Core Cultivators in the future, a designation even within Daoist academies, warrants special attention for cultivation.- Joseph_Medley6dCommented
Hasn't Carlos been constantly referred to as a coward having fles at least the last time together if not more?
Feeling the increasingly near Human Face Rock Snake Ghost, Carlos was extremely loyal and had not slipped away by turning invisible. - Joseph_Medley6dCommented
Could prob use better wording regarding the threat level than "29th rank Second Rank". The emphasis using capitalization helps a little but sounds odd
"A 9th Level Bullet Tentacles inflicting serious injury on a twenty-eight or twenty-ninth rank Second Rank Transcendent creature is quite remarkable." - Joseph_Medley6dCommented
cause snakes don't have scales and on somethin w that name...
not aiming for weak points like the eyes, mouth, throat, or even the backside would be a disservice to this Talent. - Joseph_Medley6dReplied to Jus7aguy
Hope so or he went to the wrong office party lol
Others get drunk during a team-building event, wake up with a sore bottom, and it's understandable. - Joseph_Medley12dCommented
Translator should change 8 to 6 so it doesn't seem like an error
"Once a teacher, always a father." These simple eight words were branded even more deeply into Master's heart. - Joseph_Medley12dCommented
aside from repetition and a couple other minor issues, this has been a decent story. Still is... but the lack of common sense just now. Why would you clean your knife and THEN dig in the dirt? Out of order translation maybe?
Coming from the Tang Sect, Tang San knew all too well how to deal with poison injuries. At this point, he could not even worry about whether the fire would attract soul beasts, quickly gathering some dry branches and leaves from around him, igniting a fire with a firestarter. Then, he tore down the sleeve of the Master's right arm, cleaned the dagger with fresh water, and dug a hole in the ground with it. - Joseph_Medley13dReplied to ThunderDragon
That could be. could've been a translation issue as well. Was just rather confusing after a few rereads lol
This achievement essentially secured their spots in the secondary-tier Daoist Academies. Within ten years they might have the chance to attempt the Foundation Establishment. If successful, they would become Gold Core Cultivators in the future, a designation even within Daoist academies, warrants special attention for cultivation. - Joseph_Medley15dCommented
Isn't Jade green? I haven't seen any other kinds. Genuinely curious
The belt was entirely black, with dark patterns that were nearly indiscernible unless you looked closely. Embedded at equal intervals along the belt were twenty-four milky white jade stones, each no bigger than an adult's thumbnail and rounded in shape. The stones had a warm luster, clearly rare and exquisite pieces of jade. - Joseph_Medley15dCommented
Soooo, a student judge randomly assaulted a teacher? Instant expulsion anyone?
Xiaowu was not as gentle with the teacher as she had been with Tang San; she pushed the teacher's body a full three meters away. The teacher landed heavily on the ground. Even with her Body Protection soul power, she was left dazed for the moment, unable to tell north from south. - Joseph_Medley17dReplied to BurgerNight
I'll either have to take yer word for it or go back and read it. I'll go w the former for now until I have time for the latter
Better than nothing, Hudson could only compromise as he equipped his soldiers with the most basic weapon - spears, not typical weapon spears, but bamboo-made spears. - Joseph_Medley18dReplied to BurgerNight
The regularly flowing insults are amusing given the origins. You've gotten what, two things reasonably right in these responses to attempts at helping the author with a topic he doesn't seem familiar with. Go get a lolli and enjoy the rest of the book bubba ☺️
The current supply convoy was a mess. A major battle was imminent at the front line, but Hudson did not believe that Earl Piers could really pull out more than a hundred knights to clean up the mess. - Joseph_Medley18dReplied to BurgerNight
The author said to the contrary numerous times earlier. was pointing that out
As one of the major nobles in the kingdom, the Dalton Family is not one to be trifled with. Whether in strength or connections, they are much more than what the lower nobility in the alliance could contend with. - Joseph_Medley18dReplied to BurgerNight
Because it was stated that it was an area of eastern Europe or somewhere in Europe (an alternate earth but essentially the same) a few times early on
Better than nothing, Hudson could only compromise as he equipped his soldiers with the most basic weapon - spears, not typical weapon spears, but bamboo-made spears. - Joseph_Medley18dReplied to BurgerNight
Eh. I can see that. Makes a little more sense that way, just an odd way of phrasing it.
The epic-level heroes praised in the songs by Wandering Poets only grew stronger after facing harsh suppression. Although he was playing a villain now, the detestable Hudson clearly wasn't destined to be the hero. - Joseph_Medley20dCommented
Hasn't Jack been here multiple times? Or has he only recently become the Elder?
Old Jack came from the countryside, and although he was the village head, how could he understand these twists and turns? - Joseph_Medley20dCommented
Reread the and the last couple paragraphs several times... he was almost achieving Thorough but by 6 had already achieved Minute? That doesn't add up if Minute is above Thorough
Unlike the Mysterious Heaven Method, which was divided into nine levels, the Purple Demon Eyes had only four stages: Thorough Observation, Minute Examination, Mustard Seed, and Vast. The requirement for Tang Sect inner sect disciples was to reach the Minute Examination stage, which was sufficient for the use of hidden weapons. Since Tang San had started cultivating at an early age, taking advantage of the innate energy that had not completely dissipated after his birth, by the age of six, he had already achieved a sense of Minute Examination. But he also knew that, although almost every inner sect disciple could reach the Minute Examination stage of the Purple Demon Eyes, including the Sect Master Mister Tang, none had reached the next realm. - Joseph_Medley21dCommented
He must be very powerful, had cultivation no
Tang Hao nodded slowly, "Do you understand the role of the heart? The calf muscle is the most used muscle in the human body; it's the source of all strength. Harness the power of the calves well and your physical strength will greatly increase."