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There's nothing to apologize for. Well, I guess I'm the one who should apologize. Either way, I'll try to update as often as I can. I'll be busy for the next week or two, but after that, if I can get everything in order, there will be update a more organized chapters.
Okay, thanks.
I got it. Thanks for your opinion. When I wrote the scenes here, I wanted to emphasize a little bit more obviously the emotional feelings. Well, it's not nice to realize late that I overdid it a little bit, but that's okay. It's better late than never. On the bright side, there are still some important memory scenes left, which will explain a little bit more about 'how did he lose his memories' and 'why did he keep repeating Bakugan'.
Let's see. Part of me is dying to give spoilers but I can hardly restrain myself :d
Isn't that great? Think about it. On the one hand you are trying to recall your own memories. Meanwhile, your body: "Hello, friends. Today we are going to show you how to build our very own Jamestavius Destroyer. First of all, we're going to absorb this monkey grill-style..."
No, the other one.
Jamestavius Destroyer :D Joking aside, it is an apt analogy.
It is a... Technical problem :D? Sorry, I forgot that fixing that. Also thanks for mentioned it.
Hm... I see what you mean. What I didn't pay attention to when I wrote the chapter was 'sense'. Really... Because even though Ryuu's system hasn't been explained yet, as he fought with his Bakugan - which he did throughout the first season, as you know - he was developing his body to a certain extent in every aspect. I'm not sure if that's a good excuse for him.
I agree that what scene is a bit far-fetched, but my own argument is that yes, James has superhuman speed, but so does Ryuu. You think that James should be stronger because his speed is natural(?), which is true. But there is a small point you are missing. James is as close to his human form as possible in this fight. So I can say that he is not so overpowered that he can express himself like Ryuu. His perception is high and his speed is extremely high, but the same can be said for Ryuu. At that moment, he strengthened himself through the 'system' at the cost of hurting himself. James, on the other hand, was holding back his own power at the beginning of the fights. So as not to hurt Dan. Even though he could have killed him if necessary, he avoided doing so as much as possible. It was precisely because of all this that the scene you see happened. I'm not sure if these arguments will satisfy you. But that's my explanation. Also, I lack experience in writing fight scenes, so sometimes I don't realize how annoying these things can be. Thank you for speaking up. I will be more careful to avoid such a problem again. :)