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MoonWarriorr

MoonWarriorr

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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr30d
    Replied to Kevin_Barclay

    There's nothing to apologize for. Well, I guess I'm the one who should apologize. Either way, I'll try to update as often as I can. I'll be busy for the next week or two, but after that, if I can get everything in order, there will be update a more organized chapters.

    Ch 63 Chapter 7 - Desert
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr30d
    Replied to Kevin_Barclay

    Probably all of them. But nothing in appearance.

    Ch 62 Chapter 6 - Longing for Mother
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr1mth
    Replied to Kevin_Barclay

    You're welcome. I hope you read it with the song I posted :)

    Ch 62 Chapter 6 - Longing for Mother
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr1mth
    Replied to Flirt48

    Thank you

    Ch 61 Little Announcement
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr1mth
    Replied to Kevin_Barclay

    Thank you

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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr2mth
    Replied to Kevin_Barclay

    Yes.

    Ch 59 Chapter 3 - Talking to Esther
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr2mth
    Replied to Phantom_Zero_v2

    Okay, thanks.

    A gigantic orb of flame, the sun, as the people called it, appeared in the sky, nourishing Vestoria, partly barren and partly fertile, with its healing and beautiful rays.
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr4mth
    Replied to Knight61

    Teşekkürler.

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 - Farewell of the Angel of Humility
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr4mth
    Replied to Kiran_Sinha_9549

    Tomorrow, same time. :)

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 - Stopped Summon
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Dao_of_Rebirth

    I understand. Thanks for your comment.

    Ch 53 Chapter 53 - Joe
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to marquise816

    I got it. Thanks for your opinion. When I wrote the scenes here, I wanted to emphasize a little bit more obviously the emotional feelings. Well, it's not nice to realize late that I overdid it a little bit, but that's okay. It's better late than never. On the bright side, there are still some important memory scenes left, which will explain a little bit more about 'how did he lose his memories' and 'why did he keep repeating Bakugan'.

    Hello. I think these flashback moments are getting too long. Do you think I should finish it in one episode? Or should both the external and internal progression continue?
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to BooksForLifeBeyond

    I guess you're right. I'll do as you say. A little speeding wouldn't hurt? There are very few events left in these flashbacks anyway. I'm also glad you liked the novel :)

    Ch 53 Chapter 53 - Joe
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Alex_Lex_203

    Let's see. Part of me is dying to give spoilers but I can hardly restrain myself :d

    Finally, there was a muffled groan, and Verias... was completely shattered into brown particles.
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Alex_Lex_203

    Isn't that great? Think about it. On the one hand you are trying to recall your own memories. Meanwhile, your body: "Hello, friends. Today we are going to show you how to build our very own Jamestavius Destroyer. First of all, we're going to absorb this monkey grill-style..."

    Finally, there was a muffled groan, and Verias... was completely shattered into brown particles.
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Dao_of_Rebirth

    No, the other one.

    <[Robotic Gargoyle Variant: Darkus, Code Name: Gargonoid]>
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Alex_Lex_203

    Jamestavius Destroyer :D Joking aside, it is an apt analogy.

    Finally, there was a muffled groan, and Verias... was completely shattered into brown particles.
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to Crom_Darkstar

    I'm not sure about that. Yes, There is romance but its like romantic-comedy. Um... At least that's what I think I'm going to do. I hope I do as I say.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Lost Memories
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr5mth
    Replied to XenonNoble

    It is a... Technical problem :D? Sorry, I forgot that fixing that. Also thanks for mentioned it.

    Her laughter lessened the intensity of her anger as she unloaded weeks of anger and despair on Fox:
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr6mth
    Replied to Technical_Mirror

    Hm... I see what you mean. What I didn't pay attention to when I wrote the chapter was 'sense'. Really... Because even though Ryuu's system hasn't been explained yet, as he fought with his Bakugan - which he did throughout the first season, as you know - he was developing his body to a certain extent in every aspect. I'm not sure if that's a good excuse for him.

    And when he realized it, he couldn't react. He was hit in the stomach by a ball of flame that grew and grew!
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  • MoonWarriorr
    MoonWarriorr6mth
    Replied to Technical_Mirror

    I agree that what scene is a bit far-fetched, but my own argument is that yes, James has superhuman speed, but so does Ryuu. You think that James should be stronger because his speed is natural(?), which is true. But there is a small point you are missing. James is as close to his human form as possible in this fight. So I can say that he is not so overpowered that he can express himself like Ryuu. His perception is high and his speed is extremely high, but the same can be said for Ryuu. At that moment, he strengthened himself through the 'system' at the cost of hurting himself. James, on the other hand, was holding back his own power at the beginning of the fights. So as not to hurt Dan. Even though he could have killed him if necessary, he avoided doing so as much as possible. It was precisely because of all this that the scene you see happened. I'm not sure if these arguments will satisfy you. But that's my explanation. Also, I lack experience in writing fight scenes, so sometimes I don't realize how annoying these things can be. Thank you for speaking up. I will be more careful to avoid such a problem again. :)

    And when he realized it, he couldn't react. He was hit in the stomach by a ball of flame that grew and grew!
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