it is a story with great potential, but because of the grammar errors and how it is written, it makes it hard to understand what is being said. if it is able to be edited and redone to an extent, it would be a pretty decent novel .

it had a good start but then he got a "friend" who was talking shit and was completely useless that started fights he couldn't take. absolutely stupid.

racist mc [img=disgusted][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

mc is really dumb and boring imo. it was off to a good start but mc really turned it off for me

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not bad but not good, either. [img=Why][img=exp]

wasn't good and mc is incredibly stupid [img=faceslap]

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it was a good read and would read it again but the story was lacking a little .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is really good. I loved the art and storyline was also good [img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins]