Flaxame
of reading
969
Read books
Badges
6Moments
7
Flaxame1yrCommentedYou meant "Aurora", right?
My sister's name is the first one I learnt, and it is Aroura. She is a short petite girl no more than 5ft 4 and has golden strands of braided hair going over her shoulder going down to her chest area. Just like her father's eyes and her name states, she has a mix between blue and green which becomes progressively more blue as you go towards the iris, with a few lines of green mixed within to finally create a turquoise color near the middle before reaching the iris. Her face is almost always joyful warming anyone's day with just her smile. Her Lucius curves screamed maturity and elegance yet in contrast to her posture and figure, her face was full of naivety and childishness.- Flaxame1yrCommented
I really liked your story, I realized that you are very inspired by Cultivation Online, just be careful not to base yourself too much, it's ok to have other works as inspiration, just be careful not to become a copy, I'll keep following it with pleasure, good luck . ps: sorry for bad english, i'm not native and i'm using the translator
Ch 1 Notice - Flaxame1yrCommented
author, I don't know if you've done this since I'm still in cap 66, but a good way for her to train her muscles and not get 'muscled' would be if she somehow managed to suppress her muscles to look normal even though she was fine. trained, I've seen some novels with female mc do this
"Yes, I know. You too, Eve. I forbid you." Elysia couldn't imagine the body of such a large muscular girl. - Flaxame1yrReplied to NiksElDrago
Author, are you ok?
"饾槙饾槹 饾槷饾槩饾樀饾樀饾槮饾槼 饾樃饾槱饾槩饾樀 饾樀饾槱饾槮饾樅 饾槾饾槩饾樅... 饾樅饾槹饾樁 饾樃饾槳饾槶饾槶 饾槩饾槶饾樃饾槩饾樅饾槾 饾槪饾槮 饾槷饾樅 饾槶饾槳饾樀饾樀饾槶饾槮 饾槪饾槩饾槪饾樅." - Flaxame1yrCommentedCh 64 BSWS CH-64 The Chunin Exams XXXII - Training Completion and Opponent Finalisation
- Flaxame1yrPosted
One of the best novels I've ever read, mc has a very nice personality, and was strong by her own intelligence and willpower, and I found this part of the spirits, gods, etc very original. It was something I always wondered but was never explored in the canon, very good work. ps: you've given up on the story or are you just taking a break, it would really be a shame if such a good story ended like that.
