LordRigby
I am the great and almighty Rigby. I’ve come to these foreign lands with the intent to entertain myself...
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I think the author is building the MC’s powers and general abilities through more sunlight exposure? MC currently reminds me of superboy (the clone mf) from young justice in terms of his current abilities
Peak, and I am a bit biased because I do like House Celtigar a lot. But I do think the timelining could use some work - or at least make it more explicit of the MC’s age throughout the past few chapters, there was a timeskip that threw me off slightly.
Firey priest was peak fiction
There is some potential with this route
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Honestly, this is the first fandiction I’ve seen of Kingdom - it’s a great show and has a excellent concept behind it when it comes to the zombies and how they’re made. This fanfic is alright, the writing quality could be better and so can the structure - yet it’s readable and you can see the story progress. Besides some general improvements to world building and writing I think this idea can do well.
Owari No Seraph for sure, or even House Of The Dragon
It’s all cool man, this story is great but Uni is even greater. So make sure to take breaks to do things.
You did a good job handling this response, Sir Tickler of my Holy Order of Ticklers, but I’m like 90% sure this dude didn’t read your novel which by the way is great but was instead searching for a harem lemonfest with no plot pertaining to Issei, or just a braindead harem fic
This is getting better and better mate, my only qualm is the pacing is a bit fast. Maybe before you jump straight into the next avengers movie we could get more background development, perhaps some involvement in any of the MCU Shows? That’s just my take but honestly this is going great.
Swing back
Putting Ichigo to shame here