Review Detail of LordRigby in Reincarnated in Kingdom

Honestly, this is the first fandiction I’ve seen of Kingdom - it’s a great show and has a excellent concept behind it when it comes to the zombies and how they’re made. This fanfic is alright, the writing quality could be better and so can the structure - yet it’s readable and you can see the story progress. Besides some general improvements to world building and writing I think this idea can do well.