Hello author, I think it would not be a bad idea for the hero to find a module for improving the characteristics of the warframe, also the Excalibur has an umber instead of the energy of a sword that blinds enemies, he has a roar that stuns opponents, then he stunned the moment from the early chapters the flash of the blade. I suggest using the moment of excalibur roar to impress the spectators of the tournament, or something like that. Interesting I would find the Nydus or Gaus warframe, which runs 24 km / s with training. Massive Infection or Speed ​​... hmm ... Thanks for the chapter!

Every time nice chapter!

Author, friend and colleague =) I also wanted to be an author, and came up with a chapter of the story, you can read and mark my mistakes, you, brother, understand this more than me) Dead Planet book.

I hope that because I raise the rating, people will see this novel and click on it, everyone who is interested, I will write my novel. And I hope that many will like it, I also hope for corrections from the readers. Enjoy reading.

OK! And congratulations, your book has ~ 1500 readers every day! Little by little, there will be 500,000. Then it gets into trends. By the way, I will try to call some more friends, we have already filled you with 13 pebbles ... This is how your book pleases the eyes. If you did not understand anything that I wrote, then the answer is that I am sitting with the translator XD. I will wait for new chapters, good luck.

Author, how are things going? Also, I would like to ask if there is a schedule for the release of new chapters?

You need to write more often, you are doing great, you are doing great, especially with the characters, romance, keep up the good work. Hello from Russia! You become popular. So don't stop.

Thx

Nice book....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

MC: I did it! Netbook: you folse System: idiot...

Неплохо, хотя не хватает эволюции, или системы, чтобы было развитие интересным, но мне понравилась концепция водного мира, так как, таких произведений немного, кстати читать в оригинале прикольнее, чем в переводе, впрочем, все круто. Привет из России. Автор, хорошо постарался.

Ogm omg

Super good book 5/10 : D ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ and .

Ex!

Good