My girl Winter about to be literate 🔥🔥🔥

Winter could be an adventurer? Now that's foreshadowing if eve I've seen it

Yeah, I don't think Matilda will ever make this mistake again, even as groggy as she is in the mornings

Winter for best girl anyone?

What has Winter been through to have such a horribly scarred back? Will she ever know?

We learn more about the house! How do I keep coming up with these simple ways of progressing the story?

It's a good thing Matilda likes her. I don't know what the girl would have done if she had been kicked out.

Even more mysteriously gifted. How does she have skills like those at such a young age?

Paul is so kind for letting the girl stay with him! I hope I write this to have Paul be a great protector for the girl.

Why did she panic like that!? Who hurt the girl so bad she would react instinctively like that?

I guess the girl is more mysteriously gifted than we thought.

Surely someone at the village will recognize her. Right?

This is a wonderful start, me! Excited to see where you go with this!

Shouldn't be too weird to leave a fabulous review of your own story, should it?

Golem: *Is unkillable*Sami: Paralyze it by melting it togetherGolem: ಠ_ಠ

So if attacking the goo slowed the regeneration, why not burn the goo to ashes? Wouldn't that stop the goo entirely? Or does it regenerate too fast for the flames to destroy it?

The new descriptions being used are an incredible improvement from when you last worked on this story. Has me hooked all over again! Looking forward to more

That went from 0 to 100 real quick

"... cured by the dive above..." Maybe I'm just misunderstanding, but think there are some typos here

What a return, glad to see a new chapter! Looking forward to what comes next.